Stay, I Can Heal You Until the End of Time

I have been worried about misunderstandings before I read it all. After reading it all, there are some parts that I really feel unhappy about. This is just my personal opinion: 1. The first few dungeons are very interesting, but the later ones are finished in a hurry, as if I can't write anymore. The life and death battle is very inexplicable. There is no foreshadowing in the early stage, and it suddenly pops up. After the city is built, there is no introduction in it. It is known that there are many special buildings, what they are, and their functions are not mentioned at all. 2. The emotional line is very strange. The male protagonist fell in love for no reason. It was told by an NPC and then he started to talk about his psychological journey. It felt like it was written just for the sake of writing. Moreover, the female protagonist never showed any attitude towards liking the male protagonist. She was occasionally touched by the man's self-sacrifice. As a result, the brother decided that this guy was his brother-in-law. He was picky about it first and then accepted it. There was no description in the middle whether the brother had asked the heroine what he thought. It would be nice to add a hint of telepathy from the twins in the rose garden. And the male protagonist's sudden confession during a team battle also left people speechless. He had no idea that the female protagonist knew that he liked her, and he has a dedicated personality, which is completely inconsistent with the logic of his behavior. If he thinks that the team battle will definitely win, wouldn't it be better to confess after winning. If he thinks he will definitely lose, then based on this type of personality, there is a high probability that he will not confess his love or confess it in advance. I don't know if others think it is romantic. I just feel embarrassed. . 3. Apart from the heroine, there are basically no outstanding women. The other women are also very stereotyped. When I was in Novice Village, I read the comments that there were positive female characters in the back and I was looking forward to it. After reading for a long time, the co-author was the Elf King and the male protagonist's sister in the copy? The hero's sister is still a child, and the article describes her identity as a child more. . It's hard for me to comment The first few copies are quite interesting, but it's a pity that the article starts with a high and a low. The outline of the article is very long, and it is mentioned at the end that there will be a second part. Reading the reviews of the second part is also a trap. I can only suggest that the author can focus on writing a smaller one if the control is not good. If it is too big, you will not be able to take it back.

The whole structure is written in such a big way, and the heroine is written so well. But why are the values ​​written so poorly? In the end, a thousand people win. Humanity will definitely win. Those who are afraid of death will live in an ignoble existence and will never sign up. However, some of those who signed up shrank. There are many such human qualities in the article that leave people speechless. And I also clicked on the first pair of parents. I remember that his father only had three points of damage at the beginning. Counting eight months, how strong can he be with a daughter? Realistically speaking, will a person like this be given a quota of 1,000 people? Is he worthy of being the hope of the last thousand people? You can't use the emotional card. And then the most important thing is, except for his brother, the male protagonist only knows death. There were no other teammates, only a few, and a 7-year-old child. The whole human race! ! ! Author! ! ! ! If you broaden your horizons, you can write 1,000 chapters! ! ! ! Such a good sister and brother, you write like this. Why

Looking at the story line and the foreshadowing, I thought I could write 2 million words... Why did the author end it so hastily? ! !

Completed the game, but it's a pity that there is no sequel to the "TF" game. Another article with Shen Luo as the protagonist is another trap.

Hahahahahaha. After more than half a year, I found that the collection has increased a lot. I am so happy. When I finished reading it, I only had a collection of more than 10,000. I even gave my friend Amway like crazy because I didn't understand why the writing was very good but the data couldn't keep up. In fact, the ending is a bit rushed, but many of the previous copies are really good-looking. Most of the female videos are mainly about falling in love. This one is one of the few that focuses on levels and is well written.

So pretty! I really like this kind of plot, every game has surprises! The author is so awesome??? This is the most detailed, powerful and reasonable plot, and the most imaginative work I have ever seen! Two words: great love! But I still have to say, the ending made me cry twice! ! ! I really hope there will be a follow-up, and I can also see the follow-up of Yiyi and Duoduo. The final ending of them is really sad just thinking about it! But I have to say, it's damn reasonable. Alas?, This is because the author is too stupid~ Why can't he create a HE? This kind of unresolved sadness is so uncomfortable! ! !

The ending is pretty good, poor Mengmeng, I hope she can be released one day

I feel that the group portraits were not well written, and the follow-up events of other races were not explained much. The Rose Garden was written in a hurry, but it was still great. It made me cry. Wow!

Overall it's pretty good, with a few minor bugs along the way. The background layout is quite large, and I feel it is suitable for writing a long novel. This book is too short, and the Sinking chapter seems to be a trap, which is a pity.

I've watched a lot of unlimited streams, but I still like this one the most? ?