Latest announcement: Before the Lunar New Year ends, I’ll do a thorough revision of the entire story before continuing. Sorry, for now, updates will probably be irregular.
Announcement: I’ve taken some time to convert the traditional Chinese text to simplified Chinese. If you like the story, please leave a little paw print and add it to your favorites! (Heart) Ghost Hunting in the Ancient Capital: A rather somber monster-hunting arc. Lanterns on the Water: A lighthearted little story. Next, look forward to the daily updates of three thousand words for the Magic Duel Tournament. I’ll write each story a little differently, and do my best to make each one stand on its own, so you can skip around if you like. The Magic Duel Tournament updates every night at 8:00 p.m. sharp. Thanks to my friend Wujiang Tayue for kindly sponsoring the cover! (Heart)
Blurb: Beneath the Heavenly Way, the gods embrace the world. Whether they are monsters, humans, or hungry ghosts, all can receive their protection. Fang Yuhai is the top disciple under General Su of the Su Residence at Linhai Palace. He keeps a bird of prey named Lu Yan, which Mr. Su brought back specifically to pick fortune sticks.
One day, Lu Yan teasingly flirted with the young Daoist, saying, "Once I have hands and feet, I guarantee I’ll pin you down and make you cry out for Daddy." Fang Yuhai expressionlessly lowered the tongs holding a piece of meat and played along: "Son, even if it’s nighttime, this isn’t the time to dream. You’re a bird. Finish your meat, then dream about growing hands and feet."
This is a lighthearted little story about practicing the Dao and seriously hunting monsters.
Waiting for the update... I want to stand randomly for cp!!! If you look at people with rotten eyes, both men and women will be CP!!!
After reading the first few chapters, I felt that the plot was quite good, the subject matter was not cliche, and the plot was not particularly good at the beginning, but it was okay later on. It's also good to have suspense at the end of the chapter, as it can arouse people's curiosity to continue reading. In terms of details, the reading of sentences makes people feel relaxed, and the style is relatively fresh, the subject matter is also very novel, and the concept is good. If you continue to read it, it is quite attractive. Suggestions: 1. The """ symbol that is everywhere in the text should be a double quotation mark that replaces dialogue, right? Readers who are used to seeing simplified Chinese symbols may find it difficult to accept such symbols appearing everywhere, so I still recommend changing them! 2. Remove some of the previous narration and explanations and go directly to the story. The causes and consequences and story explanations can be introduced interspersed in the story. So, hopefully the ubiquitous instructions will be streamlined. Some things are not introduced in more detail, the better. Some things are interesting only when you discover them slowly, and others are better if readers can experience them! 3. The paragraphs are too long and make people tired to read. Let me read something. If a paragraph is too long, I won't like to read it. I think some of your pages are full of paragraphs (I use the app to read). It's full. When I see this, I feel like I want to skip it... 4. There are too many dialogues. The dialogues are not a running account. Of course, dialogues are a very good way to express the plot. However, I think you must first understand what you want to express when you say these words. If there are too many dialogues, can you change it to another way of expression? … To summarize the big problems, there are too many descriptive paragraphs, which makes people feel like they are reading a game manual, and there are too many dialogues, which make it difficult for people to put themselves into the game and empathize with it. The last sentence is wrong, please forgive me...
Looks great, cheers~
Yu Weiwei~My bird~can't be seen~
Face off!
The couple surnamed Li are as selfish as my ex-girlfriend BG
Give me someone who doesn't love birds
Pay homage to heaven and earth Second worship at the high hall