Douluo Dalu: The Second Young Master's Struggle
斗罗大陆之二少奋斗记
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 198k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
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Dad, are you still alive?
Four yellow and two purple?!?! What the hell?
So, if Ye Fan kidnapped a young lady from Tang Clan, is Tang Clan going to kidnap a young master with a sword~(￣▽￣~)~
The background of the characters you created is not bad, but the writing style is too stiff and the wording is too inappropriate. I don't have a very good grasp of the character's personality, and the overall article is more like a running account. Please work harder.
The relationship between the Tang Sect and Hidden Sword Villa is complicated. As for Ye Fan and Tang Xiaowan, Yellow Chicken and Brother Pao can fight for the rest of their lives.
??? The twin martial souls were exposed like this?
The writing is so fluent... Apart from the original protagonist, what's the point of existence? And Ye Fan can travel between two worlds????
The rich ones in the villa are called young masters, and those like us are blacksmiths.
By the way, is it really okay to just say the twin martial souls so casually?
Have you changed the settings? Twin martial souls cannot be used at the same time, and there is only one soul power level. One martial soul can continue to practice by adding a soul ring. The other martial soul can also wait until the soul power level increases to obtain a higher-year soul ring. The higher the soul ring age, the better. This is the advantage of twin martial souls. If you let the protagonist add four soul rings now, isn't it a waste of talent?