Hard to Love

By the way, the click-through rate of this article is quite high!! This kind of plot... I really want to see the extended version...

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It feels good. But how much I hope that Xu can help Ying in the end. There is only one left in the 10-person killing family, and I love him so much that I can't stay. But in the end, I know that everything is just for use, and I don't know what will happen to Ying. Sigh, my idea was indeed too naive.

… ORZ,… Come on. Author's reply: Sigh, this article is finished...

The beginning also looks like a short story, a story about an assassin and his target who are hard to kill and love. In fact, I have a lot of love for assassins and the like. Yes, but this article is very loose... The author was obviously trapped by the plot and characters, so he wrote a lot of unnecessary detailed explanations, and finally couldn't finish it. It's more than 4,000 words, which is more than more, but less than that. However, after reading your article, I always feel that you didn't actually write much (more than 400 words, weight of more than 2,000). By the way, if you write a short story, it is not easy to express the inner struggle of the characters in a few thousand words, not to mention that you basically describe it honestly and sequentially (it would be fine if it was just a straightforward narrative, but at the end, continuous dialogue appears (in short stories, each sentence must have its indispensable role, and the homely type is too luxurious)... The battle lines are getting longer and longer. In expanded writing, there is no length limit, and the plot and characters will be relatively clearer than in a short story. But I personally think that expanding on this topic would be meaningless, and the possibility of it being unfinished is high. This is a short article. The author can recall again what the main point of what you want to write is, stabilize the focus, and prune off the side branches... The author's reply: Thank you for your opinion. In fact, in another trap I opened, some people said that my writing is a bit messy. Because this is a short story, I may not spend more energy on it. In fact, I found that my biggest shortcoming is the control of words. I hope that my new pit can make up for these shortcomings, and I hope that adults will also be generous with their advice.

Then you still ask me...

How do you plan to change it?? Elongated?? Author's reply: Well, to expand this story, this is the only way to change it 8 But I don't really want to do it anymore

Just read my comments. Speaking of which... This article gave me the impression that it was just a framework at first, but because the plot was good, I quite liked it... So I didn't think too much about it when I read it... Sigh... Moreover, this short story seems to focus on the latter part, which is the story of Ying knowing that he fell in love with that bastard (he hated him so much that he beat him up) and then planned to save him, so it is normal to briefly mention the inner struggle before... I don't mind anyway. However, does Lizi want to change this article?? Author's reply: Little K, do you want me to change it?

I'm just whatever I want~ Remember to tell me who you are~

What I mean is that your logic is not rigorous and profound enough, so there are ambiguities. Of course, writing skills need to be improved, but exploring human nature is also indispensable! Author's reply: I think what adults say makes sense. I don't like meaningless praise and flattery Can I add you? Because I still need your advice on some articles (hehe~ please refuse)