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If you're interested, you can read my new story, "Emperor's Capital Farewell," first. Thanks?(?ω?)?
A mountain collapse brings to light an old, long-buried case from the imperial court.
When the two meet, whose peaceful dreams will be disturbed, and whose youth will be lost?
He seems to have everything, but behind the glamour lies the endless scheming of his own family.
She seems to be the Grand Tutor's daughter, dressed in fine clothes and surrounded by riches, but in truth she is trapped in a cage she can never escape.
How many identities can one person have?
How many sides can one person's heart hold?
In this cruel world, walking alone beneath the moon, when will it all end?
The pace of the article is a bit fast and the plot is a little rushed. The pace of a novel for girls should be slower. You can slowly dig some small holes in the early stage, but you must fill them in based on the main plot. Literary talent is good, but it must be carefully crafted before the country can be beautiful and fragrant, and gradually reach a better state. Looking forward to the follow-up, keep going.
Eh? Is it a debut novel?
The people upstairs are really strict. Jpg
Girls (the author, you must be a girl, right?), Don't worry, it's your debut novel after all.
Looking forward to the follow-up (? ??_??)?
Ps. What the hell is the latest chapter "Chapter 3 Chapter 1" 23333
The author's writing style is varied and his words are gorgeous and appropriate, which is rare and especially precious among new writers. In addition, the plot of the novel is full of ups and downs and the storyline is intriguing. However, the overall background of the era and some details need to be corrected. The description of action scenes is appropriate but too bland, and the description of character details is too long-winded, making people unable to pay attention to the development of the plot. This kind of writing style can be used to write prose and poetry, but it cannot be used to write novels. It cannot make readers feel the meaning of a novel, but it is especially suitable for the reading taste of little girls.
It turns out you are still alive and well. . .
The pace of the article is a bit fast and the plot is a little rushed. The pace of a novel for girls should be slower. You can slowly dig some small holes in the early stage, but you must fill them in based on the main plot. Literary talent is good, but it must be carefully crafted before the country can be beautiful and fragrant, and gradually reach a better state. Looking forward to the follow-up, keep going.
Eh? Is it a debut novel? The people upstairs are really strict. Jpg Girls (the author, you must be a girl, right?), Don't worry, it's your debut novel after all. Looking forward to the follow-up (? ??_??)? Ps. What the hell is the latest chapter "Chapter 3 Chapter 1" 23333
The author's writing style is varied and his words are gorgeous and appropriate, which is rare and especially precious among new writers. In addition, the plot of the novel is full of ups and downs and the storyline is intriguing. However, the overall background of the era and some details need to be corrected. The description of action scenes is appropriate but too bland, and the description of character details is too long-winded, making people unable to pay attention to the development of the plot. This kind of writing style can be used to write prose and poetry, but it cannot be used to write novels. It cannot make readers feel the meaning of a novel, but it is especially suitable for the reading taste of little girls.