When I Woke Up, I Became the Taoist Companion of My Old Enemy.

After reading it, I immediately felt like my writing was being criticized. The writing has to be said to be great. But here I need to remind you that it is not suitable for a new author to write such literary and artistic works for the first time, and it is still an ancient novel. There is no doubt that you write about it because you love it. Unless you are doing it to earn royalties. Your exposure rate is not high, so no one will read it. The mainstream nowadays is mainly Huantuo, and literature and art are not very popular in Jinjiang. Your writing style is great, but many readers will click the red cross immediately after seeing such literary copywriting and find it boring. Maybe this copywriting is very funny to you, but maybe you can add some funny elements to it to make people want to click on it. There are more than 50,000 words and only three comments. Maybe you can say "don't watch it if you don't like it", but you'll feel very uncomfortable inside, right? Don't say you don't know how, because it's impossible, unless you don't love this article at all, or you just want to entertain yourself. Because I am a fan writer, I am very sensitive to the character here. The heroine's character setting is a bit vague, but the male protagonist's character setting is no problem. There are some typos. The passage does not leave much to be desired. I give you thumbs up for not using such low-level means as dividing lines. I will give thumbs up to every newcomer who doesn't use dividing lines, because such newcomers must be potential stocks in the future. I have to say that your writing is such a waste that no one will read it. It's a waste of resources to update so diligently. I'm not trying to flatter you, but it's reality. You are not very famous now, so no matter how good your writing is, no one will see it. I suggest you write some fun-oriented articles to increase your exposure. A person can stick to the path he is on, but you can change the course on the surface. It will be better to show your writing style after you have a certain number of readers. To be honest, I can't find too many faults with the article. Even if I were to deliberately find fault with you, I would probably only find a few. Ah first of all, your plot development is too slow. Although the article is well connected, the plot development is too slow. Although you are paving the way for future articles, what readers now read are plots with ups and downs. I know you have your own ideas. The subsequent plots may be more exciting, but ordinary readers may not want to read the plot after seeing the previous plot without highlights. I suggest you speed up the pace of the plot. The second is to describe the details of the article. This is where your writing is good. It can be seen that you use your words carefully. But today's readers are lazy and know better than you. How many people now have the patience to carefully read the lofty sentences in your article? What they all focus on is cuteness! That's right, they just deserve a beating. Do you believe that after using up all the brain cells to write a three-line sentence, readers will be able to shorten it to half a line? So they are lazy →_→ Although you may occasionally have some fun in your articles, most of them are serious dramas. Nowadays, the people who are famous for writing ancient Chinese are all great masters. Authors like you who write well but no one reads them are often buried, but if you keep persisting, there is probably more than half a chance that an editor will take a fancy to your potential. Don't lack confidence in your own articles. Don't stop writing because others criticize you. Ignore them. They don't know how sinful it is to bury a potential newcomer like you through transparency. Stick to the path of writing, and I don't want to say such pretentious words to you as "Stick to this path and firmly believe that tomorrow is bright." You are a person with potential, and you have to decide what will happen in the future. Ah, in addition, please believe that you will definitely be a god-level existence in the future. The above is just my personal opinion BY Illegal Party Chang Ping Pu Arabic Produced

Damn, please update~ I want to read Baibai fan (*^ω^*)

There is a bug in the middle, saying that Yanyan is a railway employee and can buy tickets when he returns to City Z. At that time, graduate students should not be able to do so.

Black Tea actually said the surname "Emiya" instead of the first name, there is a trick...

So what does your mouth here mean?