I Livestream Traditional Opera in the Modern Era [Ancient to Modern]
我在现代直播唱戏[古穿今]
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 152k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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I finished reading it in one go. Can I write a long review? The creativity is very good, and it satisfies my inner desire to watch a movie orz However, there is still a lack of writing on the relationship between the two. The heroine kisses the hero and then runs away. However, the psychological description in this paragraph is not enough, and the subsequent interaction with the hero is also a little abrupt. How should I put it, it feels too fast. Maybe I wanted to finish it quickly, but it would be better if I spread my words and wrote in detail, such as the male protagonist's mental journey after being kissed, etc. The emotional line between the two was a bit childish (I guess it's because I haven't been in love before?) Also, the heroine has traveled through time, right? . . The details of the time-travel are not carefully written, and there is not enough foreshadowing about the male lead in the previous article, and the interaction between the troupe and the heroine is not written. It is probably because there is too little written, it is too short! ! ! The subject matter is good, but the character of the male protagonist was not well captured. If the writing style and details were polished, it would be a good article. Also, since I want to write a play, there is not much description of the play in the article. The most important thing is that the main plot is huge. The second male lead should be struggling with the complex and tangled emotions at the fingertips of the male lead. He once respected him and loved him, but he felt betrayed and he also loved the female lead. These are very tangled when reflected in one person, so. . . In fact, writing this way is a bit far-fetched? ? Emmmm That's all I have to say. I hope you don't find me annoying. I really like dramas, but the circle is small and no one writes them. Hehe, come on.
If you don't make a sound, that's all. If you make a blockbuster, that's my deep love for you.
Haha, just leave after flirting~ This time it's okay
What grudges does Deng Junze have?
Hahahahahahahahahaha Brother said I came to comfort you out of kindness, but ended up being stuffed with dog food.
Hhhhhhhh look
I think exercise is not suitable for me=￣ω￣= I am very satisfied with this dog food.
Haha, openly showing affection~
If you don't come for two days, you think I've gained weight. I'm too naive.
It's Song Shiyu, right~