This is a world ruled by scholars. How will Bian Luan, a woman, save the Bian family?
Here, the system of combat is different. Would you be willing to join me in exploring this unusual world?
(The combat system here is inspired by The Confucian Sage, but how could I, a fish, not add a little innovation? If you like it, read on.)
(The author has been in poor health, so The Confucian Sage hasn't updated in a long time. It's a male-lead story, so take a look if you're curious.)
Good article, take it away and scatter flowers
After reading two pages, I can say that it feels very sloppy and gives me no sense of involvement. The article is very flowing and the water flows very fast. Moreover, the overwhelming worldview structure at the end of the first chapter will make readers a little dizzy. Then the heroine traveled to a new place, and there was no description of her new home, and her new family members were mostly mentioned briefly. When I saw Bian Quan's name, as a reader, I even had to guess who this was. Fortunately, I guessed correctly. He was the heroine's original father. I think the author can calm down and prepare for the college entrance examination first, and then wait until the summer vacation to read more articles by great writers, learn their writing styles, and then write this article. It would be very good. Because I think your idea is quite good, and it should be a quite interesting article. Of course, this is just my personal opinion~ If you don't like it, please forgive me. Come on, let's encourage each other~
Good article, take it away and scatter flowers
Come on! Scatter flowers and carry them away~