A Dream of the Red Chamber fanfic
The female lead is Lin Daiyu's cousin, and this cousin is no ordinary girl.
Even more unfortunate than Lin Daiyu, she is orphaned at a young age and sent to live with Lin Daiyu's family, becoming the legendary Second Miss Lin.
Second Miss Lin goes with Lin Daiyu to live in the Jia household, where the everyday life of the Jia family unfolds. They share Grandmother Jia's green gauze room and eat the two qian of bird's nest Sister Bao gives them. Second Miss Lin seems to belong to the "wooden beauty" type.
But then! One day, a bright pearl shines and a phoenix spreads its wings, leaving Jia Lian utterly stunned! Is this really Second Miss Lin, the "wooden beauty"?!
If a woman can be every bit as heroic as a man, why keep her cooped up in the inner chambers? Let's step beyond household intrigue and watch Second Lin stir up the world!
[I'm terrible at writing blurbs, so please bear with this one. Also, Chapter One is a chapter from the middle of the story. I wrote it first, but feel free to skip it for now.]
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I would rather it be a lily article or have no CP, than give Lin Er a man and turn a good article into a vulgar one.
To be honest, Lin Ming's previous attitude towards the drought in northern Shaanxi and her military strategy clearly show her rationality and even hard-heartedness. Why did you choose to indulge in rumors in the later stage? In fact, she has many ways to guide the general public opinion, just like how she dealt with the two daughters of Qingwen, the actor can be sent to the farm, sister Lin can release the past foster care, and the duchess can be avoided. Isn't it good to use someone else to guide public opinion? Moreover, it was unreasonable to choose to let Shen Qingshi go for personal gain later. Could it be because of the guilt of rejecting his request before? But given the circumstances at the time, with her intelligence, didn't she know that not only would she be implicated, but she would also be accused of treason and actually harm the Shen family? Mr. Zhao advised her many times, and the royal family also made it clear why she insisted on going her own way. If we say that her original intention was only to care about the people rather than fame and fortune, but such behavior is more like taking the initiative to stigmatize her, but she is a woman and has Daiyu as her weakness, so the monarch does not have much fear of her. She has already attracted criticism from some scholars and officials because of her peace talks. , She carries Daiyu's future and reputation, which is both responsibility and affection, and she attaches great importance to the honor and prestige of the Lin family in the previous article. This kind of response is neither necessary nor foreshadowing, and it seems to go against the logic of the character, which is really puzzling. Let's talk about the whole article, taking the feudal lord as the timeline. Although there are some subsections in the front such as inappropriate titles of saints and confusion of names, Lin Ming's failure in trying to enter the officialdom twice, his inability to abandon his second maid when he first met the bandits, and the frustration of having to give up planning and accept the peace negotiation due to their own plans. Although it makes people feel aggrieved, if you think about it carefully Everything is in line with realistic logic, and the personalities of the characters in Red Mansions are well grasped. The background of Red Mansions is integrated with the feelings of home and country, which is a very clever setting. This is the first time I have seen The Red Mansions written from this perspective. The Red Mansions has become a background that is closely connected to the plot and Lin Ming but is insignificant. The part where Lin Ming fights on the battlefield to serve his country and cares about the country and the people is very contagious, and it is also my favorite part. Don't say that women are not heroic creatures, and the dragon springs ring on the wall every night. However, the writing after the title was a little hasty. Agreeing and secretly pushing Daiyu to marry Baoyu, who was not a good match, can be explained as caring about Daiyu's mood. But in other aspects, as mentioned above, it is really confusing, and it is inconsistent with the logic of the previous characters. Furthermore, based on Lin Ming's previous heroic strategy of settling the world on three sides. The fact that the country is not harmonious and the people are uneasy, even if there is a foreshadowing of her long-term illness, it still seems anticlimactic, and the last chapter is even more hasty. The ending for Lin Ming seems to have been decided in advance, and it does not connect with the previous ones. The text is slightly pale, which makes people feel that the author forgot to write it or did not want to write it. Although it has flaws, it is still a novel worth reading. However, the disparity between the joyful and enjoyable first chapter and the disparity between the expectations of the rest of the novel did make me a little disappointed. Looking forward to the author's next work.
Is the author still a mother? During his lifetime, Lin Ming coughed up blood and fell ill at every turn for the sake of the country and the country. He did not enjoy much during his lifetime and died before he was thirty. . .
He was really scheming and deliberately reserved this moment to speak out, firstly to enjoy the joy of the army's victory, and secondly, to use Lin Ming's power to protect the child in his belly.
It took me a day to read it... It was so uncomfortable
Is the author guilty of a big typo?
Is it over?, I really want to cry!
The first kiss caught people off guard
Jia Zheng's kick was really appreciated, not because it kicked Baoyu, but because it was for a girl's reputation.
This is full of twists and turns. After reading the previous chapter, I was still thinking that after Bao Dai was dismantled, I thought that maybe I could give Daiyu an ambassador to China or something. In the next chapter, I wanted to dismantle Baochai. I didn't have any objections to Bao Dai's match before, but after the Jia family did this, Bao Dai's match became a bit cheap. Waiting for the follow-up, I crossed the mountains, climbed over the iron fence, and lurked here, just to hit you with one!