Soul Swap

Let me talk about my personal feelings. After Xiao Shou changed his body, his first reaction was to miss the kindergarten children, and he forced Gong to lead the class by running around naked. Although Gong's attitude was not good, but what about it? If you really love your job so much, shouldn't you change it back as soon as possible? Forcing a person who doesn't like children to take care of children isn't it harmful to others and himself? When writing, you should still pay attention to the characters and logic. It feels strange to read it this way. It is too strong to follow the plot and makes the characters seem mentally retarded.

Damn, I'd like to give you a suggestion. It started out very well, but when I read about chapter 37, I felt that Shou was too naive. No normal person would be such a noob. The acting was so bad, and he kept writing about Shou being afraid of being discovered. It was too verbose and stupid. .

Being forced to swap bodies for a year was such a big deal, why didn't you tell your family about it? And to be honest, the family can use their connections to find that master, right?

Millet! Don't be fooled by a female CPU!

It's so funny that we go to the toilet together all the time

Making things happen or being a parent?

Hahahaha, sorry, this guy is a bit funny.

That's it. ? ?

I found that the author likes to use parentheses, but I think those sentences could be expressed in another way or with punctuation marks?!

It ends abruptly. Is this an open ending?