A Modern Cultivation Journal of a Real Person

It's finished. It's good, but I think it could have been longer.

I've finished reading it. The plot is good. The writing in the first part is average, but the rest is just fine. There's still a lot of room for improvement. Come on, author.

Make a big effort to open a new map?

Spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers

Spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers

Except for the first few chapters, which were a bit out of focus and a bit messy, the following chapters did a good job of returning the focus back to the protagonist. In addition, the relationship developed very suddenly, and I fell in love all of a sudden. Although the emotional organ was stretched later and I didn't fall in love all of a sudden, most of the story was about the protagonist's daily cultivation adventure alone, and there weren't many emotional scenes between the two of them. It's too weak, and there's no sense of shared love between two people. However, the storyline still makes people want to follow it. Excluding the emotional line is a good starting point for a cultivation adventure novel.

I've finished reading it. Thank you to the author who worked hard on coding.

I naively thought there was a child-bearing plot, after all, peach trees can bear fruit, emmmmmmm they are both male and female.

Priceless means unable to sell, and marketable but priceless means supply exceeds demand and cannot be purchased.

Is this the end? There is no extra, it feels like there is a new map