My embarrassing early work. Do not read!!! Do not read!!! Do not read!!!
I'm saying it three times because it's important!!!
A quick heads-up: this is my first book, and I know the writing isn't great, so you really don't need to subscribe. There's absolutely nothing wrong with dropping it whenever you like. (Honestly, I don't recommend reading it either...)
The number of favorites has nothing to do with the quality of the writing. I happened to get it included in a free promotion, so it's not a useful indicator.
Also, this book really has no foreshadowing. Everything follows a single straight line. If anything gives the impression of being foreshadowing, it's probably because I didn't write it well.
And the ending: I spent two whole days thinking about what kind of ending to give the protagonist. It might not be to everyone's liking, but this really is the ending I had in mind.
Blurb
Xu Yi was just taking a nap like she usually did. How did she accidentally become the most scheming villainess in a book?
System voice: Congratulations on successfully transmigrating into a book. Please claim your reward.
Xu Yi: What reward?
System voice: Congratulations, you've received one bound male supporting character, Xu Yi.
Xu Yi: You mean Xu Yi, the ruthless, black-hearted big shot who kills without blinking and leaves no bones uneaten?
System voice: That's right.
Xu Yi: No, no! Take him back!
Xu Yi: What did you just say?
Xu Yi: Um... I mean... I love you.
Seeking advance readers for my new modern danmei novel: Lord Meow
Song Yi only happened to rescue a cat, but from then on, he struggled through one disaster after another every day.
You dumb cat, can't you buy cheaper cat food? Do you think my salary grows on trees?
You dumb cat, bite through my computer cable again and I'll throw you out!
You dumb cat, you're the one who brought this dog home, right? He ate all the braised pork in the house. I'm charging it to you.
You dumb cat, you still owe me thirteen million spirit stones. Remember to pay me back.
Then one day, the cat who threw tantrums and rolled around every day turned into a handsome man, tall and elegant.
Cat: How about I repay my debt by becoming your lover? (*/ω\*)
Seeking advance readers for my new fantasy novel: The Divine Beast Shop
In the Celestial Realm, there is a shop that sells rare and wondrous spirit beasts from every corner of the world, along with the skills to capture beasts and subdue demons.
It accepts neither gold nor silver, only the blessings and immortal fate that flow freely through the Three Realms.
The shopkeeper's life is going along just fine,
until a... um, lizard walks into the shop.
Xun Yue slaps her thigh. Whether you're beautiful or ugly, demon or immortal, once you step into my shop, I'll train you into a spirit beast everyone will love!
Currently updating: A Plan to Win Over the Villain (Quick Transmigration)
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The ending is too unclear.
The novel is great, but the ending felt rushed. Thanks for the big discount
Thanks for the free offer... But the novel ended in a hurry, and many things were not explained clearly.
Come on!! Talk about something slightly confusing (please ignore me if you don't want to read it qwp) 1. I feel that the reason why the male protagonist went to the demon world was not clearly explained (or maybe I missed it) 2. The male protagonist's design doesn't feel very stable. It felt a bit dark in the early stage, but later it became quite gentle (I feel that the character is not too full, maybe because I haven't seen the male protagonist's inner journey, so it seems a bit thin) 3 There are some plots that I can't understand (maybe I'm stupid qwp), but the logic of the plot development doesn't feel smooth (the protagonist goes here and there, and can't react, and can't figure out the reason for going here and there). It may also be the length of the plot. I don't spend a long description of the more important thing (the ending), but spend more time describing the places that can be omitted (I personally think that the spring, summer, autumn and winter ones may not be right). My humble opinion: There will definitely be something wrong with qwp, just take a look at it. Qwp is the first time I write an article. It's really great!! The setting of the article is touching! It feels so cute! Come on! Come on!!!
Completed. . . Too omitted
??? The story is not finished yet, I feel like I have read a fake novel. . .
Good. The progress is a bit slow. But this kind of article seems to be very long.
Although it ended in a hurry, some of the plots were actually quite good. It would have been nice if the word count was more substantial. Thank you for the limited exemption!
Thank you very much for the limited exemption. I am slowly making progress. I believe it will get better and better. Come on~
I haven't read it yet, but after reading the book review... I walked away silently... Sorry...