Flowers Fall, Leaving No Joy

Congratulations on the completion~ Although there are still shortcomings, the ending feels pretty good.

I don't understand why the heroine is still on the hillside after she died. Is it Wuhuan's school girl Shasha? I also want to know about Wu Huan. Salsa. Feifei. Gebu. The ending/. Does the author have a story? Beg.

It's great, but I feel that the tense atmosphere is not highlighted too much, that is, in the opponent between Xianhu Middle School and Professor Yao

I rarely have time to watch it... Well, I always feel that this scene is not exciting at all, because the language is too straightforward... I think the imagination is OK, but the control of the language is not proficient enough, and it feels dry. This requires more practice. Come on!

It feels pretty good, but each chapter has less content and takes up a lot of dialogue. The progress of the plot always feels a bit slow, perhaps because of the chapter division. Come on!