An old, hastily written story.
There are some things in life that you simply have to do.
To fulfill a wish buried for many years, Lu Jianqiu, eldest disciple of Mingyue Manor, heads north alone.
But a border war happens to be breaking out, with the two armies facing off, ready to strike.
Heroes emerge in troubled times, and heroes come from among the young. But... aren't the examples he has to deal with just a little too extreme?!
He had meant to watch from the sidelines and keep himself safe, so why has everything gone against his wishes, step by step?
He cannot resist those clear eyes, or that sincere smile.
He can no longer walk away, yet there are obstacles he cannot overcome. His feelings have become impossible to untangle.
Which path should he take?
Theme: There is always someone who loves you waiting for you
The first part is really good, but the shortcomings of the old article are exposed in the second part. Although it is not heart-breaking, it is very comfortable. Every time I read a good article, I feel a little sad, like saying goodbye to a friend who met by chance and then continuing to meet the next friend.
I really like Da Da's writing style. Does anyone know if this author still writes articles now?
There are many beautiful artistic conceptions in this article. Those beautiful scenery, quiet and indifferent, hazy moonlight, deep courtyard, all kinds of quiet and cold atmosphere are so beautifully written, poetic and picturesque, the protagonist silently embraces, quite romantic. The atmosphere is heightened and the scenery is used to express emotions. Readers can feel the tranquility and tranquility even with their eyes closed. I don't like the young general because he is too childish and sometimes behaves like a child. The author wanted to write about his innocence, stubbornness and cuteness, but the way he appears seems to be different. Especially in the middle and later stages of the story, the dialogue seems weird. The senior brother has become a bit weird, and there is also the part where the prince is arranged to come over. It's a bit showy when he writes about jealousy. Anyway, in the middle and later stages, both of them are a bit stupid. That senior brother's extra story can be read as a new story. The writing style is good, the artistic conception is good, and the story is beautiful, like a beautiful dream. With a trace of sadness. Personally, I think the author's literary talent is very good, but the writing may be rushed. The early stage is perfect, but the characters deform in the later stage. If the author revise it well, I believe it will be a classic. Although there are shortcomings, I still want to say that I really like the adult style, soothing and romantic. Looking forward to new articles from adults. . .
Came here specifically to make up for the points! I just want to ask the author, are you really not coming back to write? QA□□□□
After watching Remaining Claws, why didn't I enter v?
WB came here to review it, it's great~Thank you for writing~
Who knows the adult's Weibo? Recently the drama club will produce a Danmei radio drama, and I want to use this novel.
Such a good article, come and press your paw~ to commemorate it
I'm back to review it again. I also really want to watch the extra story about Lu Jianqiu and Heng'er returning to Yangzhou! I hope to see a new article updated one day^^
What's wrong with the series of articles that was promised but not continued?