Before she was reborn, the most tragic thing about Cui Xiu was not becoming a widow on her wedding night, but falling in love with a man she could never have, her father-in-law in name.
After being reborn, Cui Xiu embroiders herself a splendid life, stitch by stitch, until she meets you again among the millions.
- In this life and the last, meeting you has made up for all my misfortune.
- I never imagined that anyone besides the people and the court would find a place in my life. But I welcome you with all my heart.
Also known as My Lord, Don't Run Away
One-on-one romance, set in an imaginary world, so please don't nitpick the history~ All about sweet moments, happy ending.
A restrained, taciturn, secretly passionate chancellor who rises through the ranks x an elegant embroiderer who starts from nothing
The romance is a slow burn at first, as both leads strive to make their own way. Later on, they dote on each other and show off their love as a team.
Completed story: contemporary sweet romance, Love Blossomed Without Me Noticing, a long-planned cohabitation romance
New story: campus romance, Mint Candy Tanghulu, an academic diary of the demons of Black Wind Cave. Drafting in progress
Theme:
It is impossible for the male and female protagonists to fall in love with each other. Without the foundation of love, the female protagonist is just a fool, and the male protagonist is an old politician. Their three views are all on the same level, which is far-fetched and uncomfortable! The original wife and adopted son also died, completely to make way for the heroine, so sad...!
I really like the subject matter😁, but there are a lot of bugs😔
After reading it completely, I would like to give some suggestions to the author. I think this article can be summed up by the word "sloppy". Rebirth is sloppy, getting rich is sloppy, falling in love is sloppy, and accidents are sloppy. The story tries hard to have ups and downs, but they are all brushed off in one stroke, and the climax is not exciting enough. I can understand the author's desire to simply write a cookie, but all the illogical details in the plot have become negative points. The author's writing style is good. Although it is a little immature in some places, the flaws are not concealed. It is really dragged down by the plot. Readers can continue reading this article, but at the same time, they will feel a little uncomfortable and wrong because of the too hasty storyline. Secondly, the protagonist's mission is too flat, which makes them less human-like. The purpose of flattening supporting characters in creation is to allow the characters to quickly leave a deep impression on readers. As the character that readers pay the most attention to and try their best to figure out, the protagonist's image should be as three-dimensional as possible. All in all, as long as the author works more on details and plot arrangements, and makes the logic strict and relaxed, he will definitely be able to produce better works based on his writing style~
The lady is seriously ill, and the hostess comes to visit. Judging from the lady's vision, she may be seriously ill again. The hostess is not dead yet, so you come to the door and stay there for so long. The male protagonist is also wrong. After all, in ancient times, no matter how civilized he was, he would not say that his wife was seriously ill and let a girl come to his home as a guest.
Don't be cruel, just go smoothly.
It's over, give me flowers~
I like it ~ Confession to the author
I feel that the subject matter is quite novel, but the character structure is a bit thin, the signs of modernization are quite obvious, and I always feel that some of the plots are a bit taken for granted... In short... Big cheers for the author!!!
Suddenly I felt a little sorry for the second male lead.
Big cheers for the author! Collect it! Sprinkle flowers~