Li Chengzhou was just complaining about a supporting male character in a novel who shared his name, when he unexpectedly transmigrated into the book!? System: "Hello, Host." At the System’s request, Li Chengzhou gets along with the protagonist and becomes his mentor and close friend, doing everything he can for him and always standing by his side. And then...
Male lead: "I love you."
Li Chengzhou: "???!!!"
Li Chengzhou: "Where’s the female lead? Call for the female lead! I demand that she come save me! QAQ"
Author: Hehe.
Blurb 2:
The protagonist runs over to ask Li Chengzhou how to pursue someone he likes.
Male lead: "What if he doesn’t like me?"
Li Chengzhou answers without thinking: "Then force yourself on him. Familiarity breeds affection, so if you do it long enough, he’ll develop feelings for you."
"If once isn’t enough, do it again."
Much later, those words he’d long since forgotten come back to haunt him. Li Chengzhou can’t help crying bitterly: "Mom, I was wrong! I’ll never trick kids again!"
[New novel, please add to your reading list: Quick Transmigration: A Perfect Life]
<INPUT TYPE=button VALUE=Address ***><br>Blurb: Chen Sufeng is bound to a System and transmigrates to different worlds to fulfill their deepest wishes and make their lives extraordinary.
World 1: A domineering, powerful general
World 2: A frail, sickly genius
World 3: A cold, aloof teacher...
[New novel, please add to your reading list: Shut the Door and Release the Male Lead]
<INPUT TYPE=button VALUE=Address ***><br>Blurb: Guan Yijing finds a person from ancient times. She not only provides food and shelter, but also takes He Wei under her wing to protect her and makes her his wife. Thus begins his long journey of protecting and doting on his wife.
Male lead: "Sigh, my silly female lead. You’re an innocent ancient person who knows nothing about this era. To protect you, I can only become the strongest summoned beast and guard you every moment."
Female lead: "Sigh, my silly male lead. We’ve been together so long, and you still haven’t noticed the wicked heart beneath my little white rabbit exterior."
Theme:
The author has great ideas, but his writing style and overall plot layout need to be refined. Emotions require a delicate description of the characters' psychological feelings and other aspects. It does not mean that love can be achieved through life and death. Brotherhood can also be experienced through life and death. If that were the case, the healing technique used by the original person on Jiang Youhuai would actually become a shackles of love. When Jiang Youhuai was locked up in a small dark room, he used a strategy to lure away the demon cultivator. What exactly the demon cultivator was looking for did not fill the hole. The plot of the white tiger inexplicably recognizing his master was also too blunt. Ying Tiancheng's final conscience discovery was also inexplicable. The character Ying Chunmian is a bit cumbersome compared to the story of the deputy CP. When Jiang Youhuai takes in a younger brother, it is also inexplicable. The story of the Jiang family seems too cumbersome. If you just look at the male protagonist taking in a younger brother, the plot of accepting the younger brother will seem blunt. In fact, Jiang Youhuai should have a grudge against the Jiang family. He wandered around the Jiang family so casually without taking revenge. Jiang Youdu's appearance seemed to be a burden. It would be better to add some cannon fodder to Jiang Youdu. The system is too weak. The title of this article is obviously the system, but as a result, it doesn't have any problems. It becomes confused when it is yelled at. It has no mechanical thinking as a server. Several female characters also appear too stiff. Also, the secondary CP story that followed completely stole the spotlight from the main CP of master and apprentice, and the system was almost offline from the beginning to the end. Since it is a time-traveling book about an eunuch, it naturally has an open ending. However, as the author has been mentioned as a sudden eunuch, it is worth considering what happened to the author of the novel "Cultivation to Immortality". In terms of writing style, the author likes to talk a little bit, and cannot express emotions without description. The above are some of the more obvious questions I raised. I hope the author will adopt them. I have no intention of belittling. In fact, the article is generally good. At least the plot is not as protracted as most authors. The fast pace of the plot is my favorite style. Come on! Looking forward to your better works.
What should I do if this pair of CPs is very appetizing?
There is a greater possibility that Ying Tiancheng is the original author...
I think it's really okay for you to be so leisurely... Now that you know who the traitor is, why don't you hurry back to the sect to bring the news? There's no rush at all.
I have a significant other
Li's dialogue is a little bit... It feels like his personality is getting thinner and thinner, and now he looks like a person who hasn't experienced much...
Have I read too many novels? This one looks familiar throughout.
The protagonist is so indifferent. His fellow sect members were attacked by demonic people and were about to be beaten to death, but the protagonist watched it all as if it were a play. I can't stand this kind of protagonist anymore, so I decided to give up the trap.
The plot is good, the plot could be more exciting, but emotionally it's a bit reluctant to pull the strings together, the writing is okay, and it looks okay.
That's it. I'm not satisfied with it. It's written in big letters and is pretty good (*??╰╯`?)?