Hello, I'm a Living Dead

It was difficult to calm down, and I didn't write any emotional scenes in the end.

Why is there no emotional scene? I like the character setting very much, but it is not full and three-dimensional. It would be great if the writing could be expanded and the emotional scene added.

The subject matter is very novel, but it was too hasty later on.

The writing is good, and the ending is good. It would be better if the heroine and Jian Yu can get dressed together. Or travel to infinity

Crying so hard?

Well, ah, the writing is really like the story after the ending.

Chase it all in one go! Very good article, with novel subject matter. I have read a lot of rebirth and revenge novels, but reading "Resurrection from the Dead" like this one felt like a breath of fresh air~ The heroine's psychology is well grasped, and the pace of the early and middle stages of the novel is also very good, but the ending feels a little rushed. Maybe it would be better if the subsequent events of the Jian family or the behind-the-scenes murder of the Jian family can be described in more detail? After all, going to Jiangning, although the heroine is actually mainly going to Yan'er, from the perspective of the composition of the novel, the content of this last paragraph is a little thin compared to the previous one, and it would be better to feel more full. The last thing I want to say is that luckily I still have Jian Yu with me (ˊᵕˋ)

? If you don't like it, what about those innocent people?

Wow wow wow, it was so good, I stayed up all night to read it all

The ending was too sudden. The story was monotonous and the male protagonist was completely transparent. He didn't grow up until the end. My feeling after reading it was: That's it?