The Heroine Wants Me to Break Character

It's really intolerable! Go and finish the abuse quickly!

Bubbles popping up quietly, yeah

So, author, who is your master???

The ending is full of flowers ~ the article is very sweet and beautiful, the author please keep up the good work ~

Finally finished*?(???`?)?*

It feels pretty good! I really like attacking each other!

I've finished reading it. Emmmm, let's write down some feelings. First of all, the background characters in the novel are very good! The plot is also good! The description of the main CP is very detailed and the writing is particularly sweet! The sub-CP emotions are also expressed (just a little less) and the author's writing style is very good (?▽?) Concise and clear. Emmm Then the author can be more detailed in handling some scenarios and make them more realistic. For example, the scenes exposed in the next few chapters can be dealt with. Personally, I think it is better to take the initiative to expose the heroines when they are fully grown and not afraid of rumors. Then let's talk about the heroine. Xiaoyi should belong to the type of loyal dog. He fully shows his love for Qingzheng, is possessive (in fact, I think it is a bit too strong sometimes), and does things according to his own ideas. In fact, I think Xiaoyi is a time traveler, so he should know more than Qingzheng? Should there be more restraint? But this is not shown in the text. Emmmm Qingzheng is the kind who protects you silently and can cry to you at any time. Relatively speaking, I like Qingzheng better. Finally, I would like to give a big thumbs up to the author. Overall, the writing is good!

Emmmm, Xiaoyi wanted to be exposed before, but now that there is a chance, why are you still hiding it? Although you wrote the work for Xiaoyi, I think this reason is too far-fetched. You clearly showed that you were not afraid at all before, but now you are trying to hide it? Then do you wait until the storm is over to slap them in the face and say they are a couple? In this case, wouldn't their two images be completely ruined? Wow, the first part of your writing is really good, but I can't understand the second part (￣?￣) Maybe I haven't finished reading it yet.

The article is very well written (?▽?), But in this chapter I feel that Xiaoyi has been a little too hasty. After all, if it is exposed, it will definitely have an impact on Qingzheng, and they have not fully grown up yet, and they cannot ignore public opinion. Xiaoyi feels like a child to me, just do whatever you want, immature. But it's still good to write in big letters, pen refill

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