A Coming-of-Age Story in the Seventies

I'm a few years late, but I'm undoubtedly from the 1970s, just in time for the last batch of publicly funded universities (the school I chose was just right), and the place and family I stayed in should be considered good. I can roughly understand it after reading it, but there is already a feeling of a generation gap - it may also be due to the geographical difference of thousands of miles. This article is similar to a memoir. I personally think that the type of article should be changed to biography, essays, modern world, etc. Otherwise, it will be a bit strange.

I'm a few years late, but I'm undoubtedly from the 1970s, just in time for the last batch of publicly funded universities (the school I chose was just right), and the place and family I stayed in should be considered good. I can roughly understand it after reading it, but there is already a feeling of a generation gap - it may also be due to the geographical difference of thousands of miles. This article is similar to a memoir. I personally think that the type of article should be changed to biography, essays, modern world, etc. Otherwise, it will be a bit strange.

If you were born in 1972, I would be three years ahead of you. Many of the contents of the full text are similar to those born in 1962, and the sense of the times is not strong. The biggest reason why your article is so unreadable is that the things that reflect the people of the 1970s and are in line with the times are not focused. For example, the section on household registration is actually a very important section, but what you wrote is like a running account, which does not leave a deep impression on people. It's a very good subject matter. If the author can add and retract when writing, the taste will definitely be different.