
The Assassin's Record: A Zhili Fanfic, I'd Trade the Empire to Hold Your Hand
刺客列传执离同人愿舍江山换执手
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- Danmei (BL)
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- 8y ago
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- JJWXC
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It would be great if the TV series ended like this
It would be great if the TV series ended like this.
In fact, Ayu's life may not be a kind of torture. He loves Qi Kun, but Qi Kun is gone, leaving Ayu alone to bear the endless lovesickness, but living is not necessarily bad. Ayu has an older brother, Gengchen who loves him silently, Zhiming, and the mountains and rivers that he and Akun want to see most. Therefore, whether life or death, it is the best outcome for Ayu. Pen refill, a big confession!?
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Great, it would be great if TV shows ended like this
Isn't Murong Yu in Tianquan?
It would be great if the TV series ended like this.
"Murong Li stepped forward and asked with concern." "Concern" is used so often. . . . . How to describe expressions and behaviors to convey different artistic conceptions. A good description can even be ambiguous, giving the reader room for imagination and the author room for development in subsequent writing. The main plot is too straight, and there are no "last second" interference branch plots. Everyone prefers a sense of tension and excitement. . . . Or maybe a Danmei subplot, where you love him, he loves him, he loves him again, and you love him again and again, that's not bad either.
"I checked the temperature of his forehead, turned around and poured a cup of hot tea for Murong Li to warm up." "Gongsun Qian couldn't help but ask." The details are really good. I don't even talk about genuine care here, but readers can naturally feel it. "Gongsun Qian is confused, why does he always mention the Yaoguang royal family who died for their country today?" Murong Li was hit by an intellectual attack at Fuyu Mountain and kept leaking flaws. Gongsun Qian's IQ finally came online. . . . .
"Although I know he really cares about me" It would be better not to cheat and limit the author's performance, but to let the readers realize it themselves.