She is a mysterious woman, as elusive as the wind. Her bewitching beauty and unfathomable abilities make everyone both love and fear her.
He is the noble sovereign of the mortal world, elegant and gentle, adored by all.
She toys with the world because of a nightmare she cannot escape. So even though his love and acceptance move her, she still chooses to leave, preferring to leave him heartbroken and make him lose his merciful nature, becoming cold toward her.
Because everything hidden in her heart is so terrifying, so utterly heart-rending!
(I made a few changes and added an ending. Very little else has changed.)
A friend wanted to read this story, so I've unlocked it after all!
This was my first story, and I know it has many shortcomings. I hope you'll read it with an open mind!
A disclaimer: Yi Chu takes no responsibility for any unpleasant effects you may experience after reading!
Theme:
Take away~~~~~scatter flowers
The writing is so good, I really like this kind of writing
Not bad. In fact, I can write a few extra chapters to explain more things, which will be more complete.
It feels anticlimactic, but it's pretty good for a first-time writer.
This ending seems a bit out of tune with the previous article, and I always feel a bit awkward.
The ending is a bit weird, but I really like the style of this article :)
Is this ending too fairy tale? It is inconsistent with the gorgeous and elegant writing.
How about just letting her disappear...? This is more reasonable, or else I should change my external identity and get married again~~~~~I feel uneasy and sweaty when I look at it~~~It seems a bit nosy~~~It's because I like this article and don't want it to have bugs... The author please forgive me for being a bitch...
Does the reborn Che still have the power of the gods...? The power of stars and moon
Sigh... Why are you so sad? Although I like it, I still can't help but sigh...