
The Path to Immortality
成仙记
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 197k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 15y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
67Chapters
294Favorites
10.0Score
2.3kClicks per chapter
697Comments
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Didn't the author think of pairing Ge Lan and Lu Xia as a couple? ? I do think that if these two people fight back and forth, it is very likely that they will become a pair of strong attackers and weak opponents. . . Fanti feels like he is just a child who has not grown up. He can play with everyone, but talking about relationships is too tiring. Who do you think he can hold?
I saw this article on the Hongjin River many years ago, and I forget why I didn't pursue it at the time. Now we meet again in the vast sea of literature, and it's over. . What a fate. . . But, it would be better not to finish than to finish. . . Why would a genuine little shou, such a good emperor, fall in love with a little goblin king who nearly drove him to pieces in his previous life, but was also such a second-rate bastard who pretended to be innocent and slow? ? From the beginning to the end, we can see that the devil's glass heart was abused by his former childhood sweetheart, once and twice. The devil, who had lacked love since childhood, said that he still misses the good old days when he was abused. So, Demon King, what are you doing? ? The emperor's attributes suddenly changed in the later part of the article, from a lazy and venomous handsome man to a restrained and bitter man running around for world peace? ? Hmm~~~~This change in painting style~~~ makes it difficult for people to keep up. . It seems that this article is unfinished and unfinished
I like Lu Xia... Watched it again.
I like Lu Xia... Watched it again.
Very well written. It's just a bit locked and the story can't be connected, 555555
←_←Seeing this, this article is a piece of shit. . . In the first ending, I gave up so many small favors and chose 1 v1. Although it felt regrettable, Xiao Gong's dedication was also liked. However, in the second part, Ge Lan came out to join in the fun. He became ambiguous step by step and made Xiao Shou endure it. It was obvious that Xiao Gong almost cheated and was caught, but Xiao Shou still couldn't find out the reason. In this case, Xiao Shou had to endure and endure and endure. This is the final ending. . . ←_←I want to say, author, you are planning to write a 3P, but 3P in this situation is very unacceptable and even makes me feel sick. . . ←_←Comments are personal opinions, please 54 if you don't like it!
Why do I think Xiao Gong is more suitable for being a shou, or a submissive, sultry shou I always feel that attacking in the first person seems awkward and uncomfortable... I am reminded of an article called "Swagger". I wonder if the author has read it. It is also a fairy tale. The plots are somewhat similar. Just a little bit. It is also a good article.~Hmm~~
It feels so bad to take apart the CP
I still prefer Grant and Qianqian together. Grant would be more aggressive if the two of them are together.
Eh! Don't end it! How much I love this article! ! It's fun to watch Fan Ti get fucked, it's fun to watch Gu Lan get fucked, and it's even more fun to watch Lu Xia get fucked (too little!!) Is it still possible to continue? ! Although Zhu Lingda wrote that good things like NP will not happen in your article, I still can't help but think about it. . In the future, each will take his own side. . . . For this article, I chased you from fan JJ to a certain forum and then back again (it turned out to be Baidu! Damn, luckily my obsession is deep enough!! = =) Fortunately, you haven't left yet! Don't leave again! Whatever you write is fine, I love reading it! ! !