Her Acting Skills Are Terrible, Host

Haha, under the banner of lily wen, I wrote bg article. In the previous comment, I saw that the author said that she wrote lily wen. But I'm really sorry. I really didn't see how this was a lily wen from the beginning to the end. First of all, the role of the cp heroine is not ordinary, it is simply A complete supporting role, a kind of walk-on. If the author didn't tell me, I wouldn't have known that the CP was her. I would have been puzzled. As the main heroine, she doesn't have as many roles as her male counterparts, and it's okay that she doesn't have many roles. However, the psychological description of the main palace is also very little, completely! No! ! ! Not at all! ! ! You know, the image of a character must be full, firstly, it must be piled up with various plots, and secondly, it must have sufficient psychological description, but the main heroine not only has no plot, but also no psychological description! ! ? Is this really the heroine? ! ! On the contrary, the male supporting characters are a group with rich plots and psychological descriptions! ? ? , This is completely putting the cart before the horse. The reason why supporting characters are supporting characters is, firstly, to promote the development of the plot, and secondly, while helping the protagonist to portray a full character, he also strives to make his own image fuller and make the story more complete and real, but! But! ! There is a major premise, which is the protagonist! The protagonist is the embodiment of what the author mainly wants to express, but what the hell is the author of this article trying to flesh out a supporting role when the protagonists are still paper figures? ? ? ? , The author's supporting characters did a good job in promoting the plot in the first place, but in the second point, judging from the batch of female protagonists with weak sense of presence, it really failed. Maybe the author wanted to write a story with a strong heroine style and focus on the plot, but this article has CP! So at least the bond with the main CP should be properly portrayed, so that although she doesn't have many roles, at least she has a strong sense of presence, and it can't be to the point where people forget about the main CP, right? When a world is written down, the male supporting character alone is deeply remembered, and this male supporting character does not have any shining points that we should remember him deeply. So this shows that the author's character portrayal has seriously gone astray, making a Lily article look like a BG article. Secondly, the male supporting actor steals the scene too much. He has done everything he should do and should not do! The cp heroine is exactly like the heroine's best friend. She just does little things and helps out, without any sense of cp. However, the male co-star is always cool and domineering, and is favored everywhere. This makes people feel that the cp is unknown. Although the cp heroine has always been branded as the main palace, she really doesn't have any treatment or feeling that a main palace should have! So the summary of the above is that 1. The male supporting character is too strong in the portrayal, and the female protagonist is weak in the portrayal. 2. The male supporting character seriously steals the scene and makes the CP unclear. 3. The author is probably a straight woman, or it's the first time a bg author has written Lily. The cp line and characterization can't help but favor the male counterpart, oh no, np. Bg male protagonist. 4. If it is really the same as what I said in the third article, I suggest the author to write in the bg area. Lily is not suitable for you, and the benefits of writing in bg are more profitable. Lily is so cold, most authors just write about their hobbies, so there is no need to force yourself to write so rigidly. It feels weird when you write it, and I feel worried when I read it. I will change the ending of this article and send it to bg, everyone will be happy, right? Why should I torture you and me? Finally, although I know that this is inappropriate and that I don't like reading it, I can leave. But for the sake of paying money to read your article, please forgive me. It may be that my views are completely different from the author's. I was really angry when I read this article, so I expressed my opinion in the comment area. If there is anything inappropriate in the words, please forgive me. The author also worked hard to write the article. See you soon⊙▽⊙

Xiaoxuanzi... I crawled back... I lost my phone before and couldn't access it. QAQ, I'm sorry, why am I so unlucky?

Eat melon, Xiaoxuanzi, I'm sorry, I have been strictly controlled recently and cannot grab my phone every day. In fact, I am quite lazy. I only read one chapter, so I only save it once ╮(￣▽￣)╭, I want to keep my claws!

Phew, our Xiaotong is a genius. Today my classmates and I went to catch dolls, 23333, but we caught dozens of dollars. A little sister, ten dollars, caught six or seven, and said I'm sorry, boss, I let you lose again, hahahahahaha, we both kept laughing wildly, Xiaoxuanzi, good night, I wish you a good dream.

Woohoo, did Xiaoxuanzi miss me? Because of the midterm exam, I haven't touched my phone for a long time. Congratulations on joining V. I... I will insist on leaving comments and finish reading. Basically, I can write. In mathematics, I basically handed in blank papers and I am paralyzed (╯-_-)╯╧╧

How can you make up your mind about this!

In fact, some people said that they can be omitted emm It was fine the first time, but a little weird the second time

Go to bed early and get up early, and get some rest too!

Jj updates are not pushed again. Annoying

Hehehe, the shy general's male concubine xddd