Blurb
I am a pawn sacrificed to a conspiracy, an abandoned skullcap. I have journeyed through the long river of time, searching all alone for a place to call home. But what I most want to ask is this: My love, why did you treat me this way?
I have wandered through time, been buffeted by wind and drenched by rain, licked by Yuan Luo, and fought over and tormented by my enemies. Yet she alone has always treasured me.
----The first volume, The Heavenly Maiden's Tribulation, is complete. The second volume, Crossing the Void, will be uploaded at a later date. Thank you, my dear little angels, for your company and support along the way.----
P.S. 1. A small-time production. If you like it, my dear little angels, please add it to your collection~ 2. This story is entirely fictional, so please don't read too much into it
Sina Weibo: Yan Yan Shiyueban
Theme:
I came up with this name on a whim, but I didn't expect it to actually exist (?`?)
Come on! Following the article...
Long Aotian---Spreading flowers is quite beautiful.
I was attracted by the title of the article. The article is very beautiful.
Your name is so scary~~~Haha
Make big ideas clear and clear
Who Moved My Skull? When I first read the title, I thought it was a thriller and suspense genre. But after clicking in and reading the copy, I felt a sense of desolation and sadness. The text is written from the male protagonist's perspective. The male protagonist Long Yu was framed and imprisoned in the skull, and then met the kind-hearted female protagonist Tang Qingxue. After reading the previous content, readers can't help but wonder what happened back then and why the male protagonist became like this, which makes people want to read more. By the way, I would like to praise the author's writing style, which creates a fantasy scene for people. The characters in the story are eloquently told, and the more you look at it, the more exciting it becomes. In fact, I personally think that the two chapters of the prequel and the preface are very well written, but as a novel, readers generally like to decide whether they like and want to continue reading based on the content of the first two chapters. Whether the first two chapters are attractive is very important. However, the author thinks that the first two chapters are not very connected with the main plot, which will give first-time readers the illusion of being confused. The description of the giant sword and the skull in the preface is too long. It is recommended that the author appropriately delete the two chapters and merge them together, and describe them in detail when the heroine sees the skull for the first time. This way you won't lose clicks and readers in vain. The above only represents my personal opinion, thank you to the author.
I like the literary design very much, adopt it, and update it soon...
When I saw the skull, my first reaction was to think of riding and slashing (⊙v⊙)
You asked me how deeply I love you, which represents my heart. Congratulations on the new article!