[Western Crossover] Every Livestream Wants My Life

My tears are worthless, why do I still feel that the ending is very regrettable, oooooooooooooooooooooo I stayed up all night, I felt unwilling and felt sorry for many people! ! ! ! I think you owe the old man, Tom, Sherlock, and Captain America a he! ! ! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I feel bad

One thing is strange, nothing else happened after meeting Riddle for the third time, right? At that time, Riddle was still devoted to the heroine, no matter why his feelings came so inexplicably. Why was there only hatred when we suddenly reunited? It's more inexplicable than feelings Also, the heroine's IQ dropped after she came out of the first world, and it became more obvious as she went on to do so. She turned from being smart since she was a child to being coquettish and slow. She explained it with many reasons but didn't explain it clearly, making it confusing.

The heroine travels through Ginny and CP Draco. Starting from the very beginning of the Hannibal unit, it is impeccable in terms of plot, writing, and character development. It can be said that it is very palatable on a certain level. Uncle B also has a very complex character image in the "Lamb" and "Red Dragon" chapters. Overall, it is very good. That is, if the heroine's character is dealt with here, instead of writing the heroine as strong and cunning and fighting wits and courage with Uncle Ba, it would be more exciting to write her as being seduced by him and then defeating herself and choosing to fight against Uncle Ba! This is more in line with Gryffindor's character, isn't it? And it matches Draco better. Although it's okay as written, I felt uncomfortable with the way Uncle Bart became interested in the heroine due to magical deception. I want it to be black or white. It's obvious that the heroine's position and character can be explained more naturally here. It's really a pity. There is also a point here that made me laugh throughout the whole article, and every time I was persuaded to quit, I was persuaded to come back with self-relief - the disgusting system and audience settings were not explained clearly at the end, and there was no explanation of what the audience's actions in the early stage were preparing for. Then comes the Sherlock chapter, which skips a few chapters to reveal the mastermind behind the scenes. This chapter is always very unsatisfactory for me. Obviously knowing that the character Uncle Ba is popular with readers, why not handle his exit more reasonably? ? ? I just can't accept this way of exiting Uncle Ba. It feels like a deliberate show-off, not to mention the sudden appearance of Uncle Ba from a parallel world in the last inexplicable reunion chapter, which makes readers really hold their breath while reading. I was waiting for Uncle Ba's reappearance to fight against the system and the audience, but it ended miraculously. When the mission failed, Uncle Ba's feelings for the heroine disappeared, which made me choked up and couldn't bear it. But to be honest, I like Sherlock better than Draco in this article. If Draco hadn't been chosen directly later, Sherlock would have been better. The most boring part is the Dark Lord chapter. Let's not talk about the fragmentary and messy narrative technique one after another. It is called a series of foreshadowings, which does not allow the readers to understand what is going on. Let's talk about the love that the Dark Lord has inexplicably arises in my eyes. I personally think that with Voldemort's natural anti-social personality, it is completely impossible for him to like and believe in it. I had a woman who "appeared from the sky, beat away the person who bullied me, threw me in a hotel, and disappeared within a day without caring." Not to mention that the heroine was only a teenager at this time. If it were me, I would still think that this person's inexplicable kindness really made her feel like a fool, and I would also condemn this person for not fulfilling his responsibilities. If you say teach, just teach. What the hell is going on when someone disappears within ten sentences? As soon as the emotion that left me speechless was born, I didn't understand what this "dream" was about, and what was the meaning of the plot in which the tramp attempted to rape the heroine? Is it good to reflect the weakness and powerlessness of the heroine? Are you just trying to shift the blame for Voldemort's murders and making Horcruxes onto the heroine? Having said this, I really don't think Voldemort loves her very much. If I were Voldemort, and there was such a person who suddenly appeared and left frequently in my life, my first reaction would definitely be that I would not trust her. She definitely has plans for herself, and from the perspective of her character that never ages or changes, she is With his high IQ, high EQ, and records of time magic in the history of magic, as well as his "admonishment" not to be too obvious or too deliberate, Voldemort couldn't have guessed that the heroine came from the future. Even if it didn't work, it would be safe to guess that the heroine was undergoing uncontrollable time travel, right? Not to mention telling stories from the heroine's mouth, researching her secrets of immortality, etc. There is also a storyline where the heroine is seriously ill without a single explanation of the cause and effect. I don't even know why the heroine is ill. What did Voldemort do to think that the heroine is ill? The author is completely unable to justify it. Here the male protagonist is forced to become wise, and the female protagonist is forced to become wise. I have nothing to say. In the final Avengers chapter, the male protagonists single-handedly directed the female protagonist to despair. The so-called cure does not mean that you can't be born with 100% favorable opinion and just slap the buff on someone's face without even looking at it! Captain America is shameless, right? ! I was persuaded to give up after watching the heroine run five hundred miles as soon as she saw Hannibal in the parallel world. I was really OOC and brainless, and it was really too far away from the first world. I thought I had found a good article, and I managed to get through the fatal embarrassment in the first three chapters, but I never expected to fall into such a low-end plot that started and ended. Then I thought that all the rugged plot developments in this book were actually driven by the writing "system" and "audience" read as "the author is too lazy to write and does not want to see the world." I felt as disgusting as if someone had just fed me a mouthful of cock :)

That perfect world wouldn't be the world where Sherlock lives, right? Then Sherlock discovered that the deer was Ginny

Treasure novel! Mrs. Treasure! Draco is so sweet, but it's a pity that there is no separate episode for Uncle Bart, Sherlock, Tom, and Captain America.

It's so cruel. It's not just that I can't breathe. It's too cruel.

It's so cruel. It's not just that I can't breathe. It's too cruel.

Woohoo, my tears are worthless

Feel like it's not over yet? Of (bushi

The ending should be sweet, but I feel so sad after watching it. It would be nice if everyone had a little side story. They all have a he. I think Uncle Ba's image was created best in the early stage, but little Malfoy is also very sweet.