This is a short story, and my first time writing and publishing fiction.
Blurb: Qing Yu (Yu) is a female soul from another world who takes over this body. Bound to her "nominal" wife, she has no choice but to give herself up and ends up living a life others envy... Mu Qing, CEO of Mu Corporation, is facing bankruptcy and has no choice but to marry Qing Yu to secure funding. She loses not only her innocence, but eventually her heart as well... No one knows where love begins, but once it does, it runs deep.
Theme:
In some places, I feel like I could write a longer story about the changes in their relationship, from being cold to a little heart-warming at the beginning, to being cold-war jealous, to the final confession. I feel like their relationship is rising too fast, and I could describe the small actions that make each other's heart flutter.
Come on, author, I look forward to the next article.
Some of the clips were borrowed from others, right?
In some places, I feel like I could write a longer story about the changes in their relationship, from being cold to a little heart-warming at the beginning, to being cold-war jealous, to the final confession. I feel like their relationship is rising too fast, and I could describe the small actions that make each other's heart flutter. Come on, author, I look forward to the next article.
Some of the clips were borrowed from others, right?
I think it would be better to write a long novel