Detective Conan: Off the Same Battlefield, Behind the Scenes (All Ran?)

It was so well written that I actually felt a little sad for Conan after reading it.

How should I put it? Although the name is a string, if you calm down and read it carefully, you will basically not faint. The more you read it, the more you feel a little sad and want to cry. The author's definition is quite good. One more thing, it's a very interesting short story.

Will Taobao have a book? Want to buy

Madam, can I still buy this book now?

Also, are you really not planning to get involved in corruption~ It would be great if you could open the door to a new world_(:з∠)_

How should I put it? Ww I may have to use a bit of a venomous tongue next, and it will be mixed with some personal preferences. I don't know if you can accept my deep love qwq When it comes to short fan stories, I think the main goal is to create a visual experience that readers cannot get from the original work, such as making candy/selling rotten food/spoofing/etc., And then using the plot as an auxiliary. If you want to write well, the most important thing is that the rhythm does not drag, the rhythm does not drag, and the rhythm does not drag (emphasis added). You may also know this, but - you haven't done it. The main problem is that you chose to use dialogue to advance the plot! ! As a result, the development of the plot is very tame, the conflicts between the characters are not obvious, and the plot itself is actually very bland. The whole story gave me a drowsy feeling, and I had no desire to continue reading (because except for the setting at the beginning, there was basically nothing that aroused my interest after that... That's right, you said you can skip that part_(:з∠)_) I read this article intermittently. I read it for a while, took a break, and persisted to finish it, because I thought if it were you, maybe you were just a slow-burner? I was looking forward to seeing candies that are as sweet as Toru's inside... However, although there was a feeling of surprise when I saw the jewelry box, it was not enough to make up for the lackluster experience I had before! It's like drinking too much boiled water and it doesn't taste good in your mouth. I wanted to add honey to it, but I found that there was only a spoonful of sugar (Д`) To sum up, I feel that this article cannot arouse my interest in reading, and I can't help but point out the following points: 1. The rhythm is too slow, the content is scattered, and the priorities are not obvious. I don't know if I'm doing the reading comprehension right: To sum up the core content, it's probably that the actors who played Conan in the past have a crush on the actor who plays Xiaolan, but they all hide it and don't dare to confess. The fourth generation mustered up the courage to confess, but was mistaken for the kind of love that a younger brother has for his older sister. However, this theme is not highlighted due to some scattered and dispensable jokes. It can be seen that you have continued the habit of writing long stories, but when it comes to short stories, it is better to stick to the heart. I prefer to write one idea to the extreme. The more words, the better. You must learn to control and delete. Short stories, short and concise are the ideal state. 2. Too many characters can easily cause confusion and make you tired. You should have had the same feeling when you wrote this_(:з∠)_Well, I guess... Anyway, I'm a little tired. Although you tried your best to write it clearly and without any confusion, as a reader I still @_@, because as a reader I don't spend too much energy to recognize people, and this is a short story! ! This is a short story! ! One of the advantages of doujin is that you no longer need to work hard to shape the character of the original character, you only need to think about how to continue it, but back to the setting of the opening chapter... I suddenly felt a lump of blood in my throat, and I couldn't help but want to punch the wall. TvT continuation can be continued, but the character's personality is distinct and distinct. When it comes to handling the characters of Shinichi or Conan in the past, you probably wanted to write a subtle difference, but unfortunately you didn't handle it well. It's okay if the pronouns are similar, it's not the point. But facing four guys with identical faces (ignoring the age difference) and basically the same key personalities (mental age), emmm... I fell into deep thought, what is the meaning of this? Feel free to express my understanding: Most likely I want to write about the interaction between Shinichi or Conan in the past. It is quite interesting to look at this thread alone_(:з∠)_You can go in a purely plot direction [If it were me, I would arrange it like this, and I will sell it by the way. But the title says "All Lan Lord Xinlan", and the core should be the interaction between Xinlan and Kelan. After reading the whole article... (ノ=Д=)ノ┻━┻The interaction between Mao Xinxin and Xin Ke is so dramatic! ! Yes, it's a show-stealer. This directly leads to the unclear priority in point 1. Personally, I think that instead of putting these two memes together, it would be better to write a short story of 2,000 words each separately, which would be better than the current one. 3. No, no, I can't edit TvT anymore. I'll just add a few of my first direct thoughts after reading it. I think the most exciting part of the whole article is the beginning. Yes, I have mentioned it before, but the part that you said you can skip and not read is the most eye-catching to me. There are many interesting memes, about Koai of the past, about Akai and Subaru, about Amuro, etc., Plus the Conan of the past mentioned before, but the effect is not very good. I thought about it many times, but in the end I had the patience to read it. I was a little disappointed. What I saw was slightly different from what I expected to see based on the title (the first impression was not good, it was like I had gone in a big circle to reach my destination. Then I suddenly had the feeling that you obviously have the ability to write better, but your strength is useless (chest tightness) ◇ ◇ ◇ You have to believe me, I really love you, really QAQ, although I use this form to write this type of review this time, no matter how you look at it, I am making a big mistake. But after all, it is a long review of nearly 2,000 words, the crystallization of which I have been pondering for half an afternoon~ Even if it is the crystallization of vomit, it is still a crystal_(:з∠)_ Well, to be honest, I am not sure how much you can help me with my level of less than half a bucket of water. Well, definitely not much, more is just a matter of personal preference. But I still hope it can help you~ ps. I'm a little worried that my long talk might scare away readers who click in later, so I think I still need to emphasize it again. I personally have a picky taste in reading literature, and I often have literary shortages, and everyone has their own preferences. What I don't like may just be what you like. Click "Start Reading" to judge for yourself qwq Don't stop because of my opinions, I can't stand it qwq In addition, what I most admire and want to learn from you is how well you master the characters_(:з∠)_without embarrassing OOC, which is really special! Don't! Great! Moreover, it was really sweet to say that I made sweets in the stories about Tou Ta, Sero and Princess_(:з∠)_

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