
The Importance of Making a Character Look Good
论角色粉饰的重要性
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 45k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
33Chapters
2Favorites
1Nutrient gifts
159Clicks per chapter
30Comments
Reader comments 21
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Come and look familiar~ Come on! Super pretty!
Thanks brother for working on the code, la la la (^o^)/
It starts with a philosophical paragraph, 666
At this pace, the child will disappear immediately
I want to complain but don't know where to start, anyway, come on
I, I, I, I will write my first long review!! (??????)False Let's talk about the first impression, orz, it's amazing because I've watched a lot of late-night ghost story series before and I thought my friend's story was not scary at all, hahahahahahaha. But it should be considered urban supernatural and suspense orz? Isn't it scary or is it less exciting to watch it late at night? (????ω????)? QwqRange's character descriptions are great, and the plot settings are also pretty good. QwqBut sometimes I can't tell the difference between Lin Huan and Lin Luo orz By the way, Lin Huan's good gay friend is considered a deputy CP [Please spoiler (???ω???)] Because the second story is not finished yet, I can't comment orz, but I watched the first story completely (?????) And was confused! I was confused mainly because after I jumped off the bus, was it because I couldn't concentrate or what the QAQ said. I was very dizzy from the beginning (*?????) And emmmmm, there was too little interaction between attack and reception, ahhhhhhh. Requesting for some intense [emphasis added] interaction★ As far as qwq is concerned, there is too little description of another world. XD qwq is probably slow to catch on, but because it takes into account the past and present lives, there should be some collision of flames in the current life. But as for the whitewashing, I haven't seen it at all. Is there any obvious foreshadowing or description in QAQ? Please give me some advice (*/ω**) qwq There is also a second story like Nightingale that can be expanded on a little bit~ Don't limit it to memories~ Otherwise (?????) It will be too little and not enough to watch! [Urge for updates, urge for updates, urge for updates] Please order more once hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha _(:зゝ∠)_ I don't know if this is enough for a long review, so I'll add a few comments. _(:з)∠)_This is Jiuxiao who makes a serious and long comment [not]. Please accept my unintentional comments. Of course, this is by no means a writing guide, just some thoughts after reading it??(???????) Hahaha emmmmm, please ask the author to receive a reply★
I became a big boss in three years. This life is a cheat.
It should be "them", the dormitory was written wrong at the beginning
It really challenged my IQ×_×
The metaphor of white lotus seems to have a story_(:з∠)_