It's very close to life, and true friendship is really beautiful. !
It's really nice to have someone willing to tolerate your imperfections.
The writing is not bad, but some sentences are a bit difficult to pronounce and could be described in more concise language. Come on.
Friendship is a good thing
Refuse to make trouble 233, the copywriting is too simple, it can be written more fully, the content can be divided into more paragraphs, the writing is good
Yes, I feel that the heroine is quite aloof, and I guess she will be quite insensitive to feelings later on. . . . Expect.
The indifferent style of writing touched my heart of freestyle, and I look forward to the story of these three classmates.
It feels like the author is writing with the attitude of a bystander, which is a bit detached, but the psychology of the male protagonist and the female protagonist is very delicate, but the writing style feels indifferent when reading.
Looking forward to the next development of the story.
Freestyle haha
The heroine finally appears! I hope there will be more environmental descriptions and dialogues. Too many psychological descriptions make it hard to read. (ˉㅂˉCrimin) I also hope there can be more paragraphs. Paragraphs that are too long give people a bad reading experience (ｰ̀εｰ́). The wording and psychological descriptions are great~ Come on~~
It's very close to life, and true friendship is really beautiful. !
It's really nice to have someone willing to tolerate your imperfections.
The writing is not bad, but some sentences are a bit difficult to pronounce and could be described in more concise language. Come on.
Friendship is a good thing
Refuse to make trouble 233, the copywriting is too simple, it can be written more fully, the content can be divided into more paragraphs, the writing is good
Yes, I feel that the heroine is quite aloof, and I guess she will be quite insensitive to feelings later on. . . . Expect.
The indifferent style of writing touched my heart of freestyle, and I look forward to the story of these three classmates.
It feels like the author is writing with the attitude of a bystander, which is a bit detached, but the psychology of the male protagonist and the female protagonist is very delicate, but the writing style feels indifferent when reading. Looking forward to the next development of the story.
Freestyle haha
The heroine finally appears! I hope there will be more environmental descriptions and dialogues. Too many psychological descriptions make it hard to read. (ˉㅂˉCrimin) I also hope there can be more paragraphs. Paragraphs that are too long give people a bad reading experience (ｰ̀εｰ́). The wording and psychological descriptions are great~ Come on~~