Lin Qingying (Originally Titled: A Modern-Day Freeloader Stays in Ancient Times)

Let's take a look at your previous articles.

You wrote The World Without Thunder before, which is the previous version. It was very well written. It was the most imaginative novel I have ever read. A girl who can spice things up, a man who can use air as a weapon, and a man who can tell if someone is lying, but he can only tell whether he is right or wrong. But then you stopped writing it, and many years later I can't even find the original version. Tieba is gone too. I saw someone on the Internet saying that you plagiarized, but you explained yourself that there were five versions or something. But I don't think there is a better work than this. If it is plagiarism, then it is a plagiarism that makes people happy. Maybe you can't see this message. But I leave this passage to prove how amazing I was back then. Even though the book is gone and never finished, I remember every detail.

After reading the ending, my chest felt stagnant and I was almost suffocated. . The heroine's final choice in love and life felt a bit hasty, without any foreshadowing, and looked too harsh.

Everything else about this book is good, but it made me uncomfortable. For someone like me who is extremely afraid of pain, the most annoying person in the book is Chu Youran. As a result, the heroine not only did not retaliate against her, but also became friends with her, which made me feel very frustrated.

I finally finished reading it, and the character of the heroine really makes people complain. Although I probably want to write about the life of an ordinary woman in the world, I think that if the story even contains ordinary people, then why write it? Since it is time travel, the heroine must have something different from others, or a spirit, otherwise, if an ancient woman can do something, why would she do time travel again? So this is why many people find it a bit baffling. The protagonist can be a cowardly and incompetent little woman who is greedy for life and afraid of death, but there must be some bright spots. But in the article, besides seeing that she is afraid of death, she is still afraid of death, and I don't know why the male protagonist likes it.

I just hope that you, girl, can come back. Anything is good, romance, online games, urban supernatural beings, at least open a Weibo and send a message. After two or three years, it makes people feel empty and unfulfilled.

I like Qingying very much, he can recognize the reality clearly, he will be weak, he will not trust his lover, and he will poison Murong for his own sake. The psychology is portrayed quite well. In fact, I have been expecting Yunli to fall in love with the heroine. But even if I don't fall in love, I think it would be good to be with Yunli. As written in the article, apart from his abnormal personality, he is a very comfortable person to get along with. He has a thoughtful mind and knows the elegant meaning of string songs. In the end, Murong came to find Qingying, and the two of them were together. But I really want to see Yunli's ending.

Only today did I know that the finished version of Qing Yi's article was written in Jinjiang and not in □. Speaking of which, this heroine is my favorite woman in Qing Yi's novel. Compared to Chu Yu and Long Long, I like this Qingying the best. I originally read it on □, but when I saw that the author said it would be finished but there was no ending, I felt uncomfortable. Then I downloaded the TXT version on my mobile phone and saw the ending. The peerless beauty Mr. Yunli whom I loved so much when I first watched "Talk and Laughter" has turned into a dark-skinned young man here. Although his personality is still so dark, I was still happy at the beginning. But the more I look at it, the more I feel like there's something wrong with this person = = So what I want to say the most is that Tsing Yi's skill in portraying characters is really good, but I also know that Tsing Yi probably won't see it, including the movie "The World Without Thunder" that I have been thinking about for a long time. . How many of us are waiting! TAT howl! My favorite male in Tsing Yi's novel is Axiu. That's too far. The beginning of Lin Qingying's time travel is like all of Tsing Yi's novels. She wears it while sleeping, and when she wakes up, she finds that she has traveled through time. There is no car accident or death. The protagonist is at a loss, and the supporting characters are also at a loss. Later, classmate Ahua ran away, and it would take several chapters for the male protagonist to make his debut. Because Qing Yi's novel at this time has no outline at all, it will take time to decide whether there will be a male protagonist and who the male protagonist will be. When I clicked in again, I wanted to rate it, although I no longer needed to rate the points. I laughed when I saw the classmate downstairs saying that he wanted to give Qing Yi the whole sea of ​​flowers. I also wanted to give it to someone who has no outline and who only develops the plot based on the character's personality and ideas. In fact, he is one of my favorite authors. But in fact, what people are thinking is: If you can finish "A World Without Thunder", it won't hurt to give you the whole sea of ​​flowers. Ah Xiu is the eternal pain in my heart, not even Rong Zhi, not Lin Qi, not even Seven, no one can compare to TAT howling again! So I guessed the beginning but not the ending. Eric has blue eyes, but in the end he turned into a father. Murong has the eyes of a protagonist, but his final appearances were pitifully few, although he was indeed the male protagonist in the end. But this male protagonist, who is obviously domineering and gentle, has to be tortured like this. This is really God's will to mess with people. TAT [I won't cry without Axiu. ] Well, when I saw Yun Li, I naturally thought of Yun Kaiyang and Yun Xiaowang. Although these two people have never appeared before = = Young Master Li is still here with his eyes and ears and his extensive experience, which can be compared to "Jianghu Daily". Speaking of Yunli, it reminds me of the red dress of Young Master Yan Bing, the Xipi I once admired. It can be said that Mr. Li and Mr. Yan are both vengeful princes. They start fighting as soon as they meet, and they have to fight to the death. Moreover, Mr. Li doesn't take Xiao Yan at all. It's really sad. So I still have a crush on Cai Shao and Mo Lin. It means Qingyi that you were trying to imply something to us when you gave Morey a false name! Howl! Okay, I've gone too far. I have nothing to say about Xiao Chu. His gender is a mystery = = So I don't know how to describe my favorite things. After writing for a long time, only Murong and Yunli can describe them = = What a miserable child. In fact, my only wish is that A Xiu and Xiao Mo live happily together! Keep on howling! TAT

It's too humble. Originally, readers came to the story just to find torture or fun. This ending is not very good, it is very light and has a little bit of sour happiness, but it makes people feel that it is not enough. I feel that the heroine was thrown around miserably by the author along the way. All the male characters were puzzled as to why the heroine could always find a mission that cost her her life.

It's so cruel. I've never seen such a miserable heroine.