My Tycoon Ex-Husband Begs Me Through Tears to Remarry Him

What about the promised rebirth episode?

Big hug, I found it from the official account's tweets. I read the comments first and it seems that I don't feel very good about it. I stepped on many people's faults. I just wanted to kill the time by reading the free chapters. I didn't expect to finish the article in one day. Overall, it was well written, and at least there was an inexplicable magic that made me want to read the next chapter, and then the next chapter. To be honest, the writing style can only be regarded as futile, the plot is funny, and the writing is enjoyable, but I feel that it cannot stand up to scrutiny. Some places are not written in detail, such as school violence. I only wrote a few sentences as background, and the heroine's feelings about it are not depicted. For readers, it is impossible to empathize. So, it is difficult for me to feel that the heroine is pitiful enough to feel distressed in the early stage; in some places, I feel that it is not written well, such as In the plot of "Everyone is Accelerating", Tian Zai got the death card, which can be effectively used three times, but the plot of using it was only shown twice in the plot. It was very enjoyable to watch the whole process, but I really want to know how Tian Zai will use it in the third issue, and what kind of different beatings will happen. I feel that it is not written in place, and Su Shuang's energy comes to an abrupt end before it is fully exerted. In addition, I saw in the comments that the male protagonist is violent on campus and the female protagonist is still with him in the end. I want to say that the novel is a novel, and there is no need to insert yourself into reality and make yourself uncomfortable. There are things about the male protagonist that cannot be cleared up, but his badness is not really bad. This is the point where the author portrays his perversion. The novel is a novel, and in reality, it is better to stay as far away from perversion as possible. I have experienced school violence for a period of time. I am now glad that it did not escalate to physical conflicts. It was just verbal ridicule and ridicule. When I was younger, I and my classmates accidentally stayed away from that little girl who came from a poor family and had dirty clothes, bad studies, and an indifferent personality. Maybe I was bullied later and it was retaliation. However, these pains and shadows continued until after I started working, and I felt how ridiculous I was for being cowardly, and how hateful I was for isolating the girl. I just unintentionally stayed away from that girl, but I might have become one of the perpetrators and hurt an innocent and poor girl, just like the boys who mocked me in junior high school. What they did at that time was insignificant to them, but it was a huge shadow to me. I will not make any defense for the perpetrators of school violence. They should be punished if they hurt others. The hostility in comments should not be so severe. If you want to scold, you should catch the perpetrators in real life and scold them severely. This is not the place to instruct an author on how to change his writing. If you don't like reading, just leave. What kind of novels are not available in the online literary world? The author writes that Tian Zai has such a great tongue, why didn't he inherit it? We just ignore unreasonable comments, just like Tian Zai, he doesn't hear what he hears but doesn't think what he thinks. I hope your future works will get better and better! Getting out of the circle is just around the corner! Come on!!!

I watched La Bibing. At first, I thought that Huai Mo was gentler to Tian Tian and it would be better to be with him. After watching it, I realized that Qin Yu is better. It's true that Tian Tian longs to be treated gently. Later, Qin Yu was really, really nice. I was very relieved to treat Tian Tian well. I felt so happy. We, Tian Tian, ​​also have so many people who like her.

So what is Waimo doing here? I feel like deleting this person will have no impact. Later, when the male and female protagonists get together, he will disappear?

Qin Yu's character design is so full!

I think it's a pretty good article, and I won't get the bad reviews on the free chapter. I hope the author will finish writing the extra chapter.

To be honest, no one can be the male protagonist. I didn't mean to cause harm, but it did bring school violence to the female protagonist.

Author, what about the follow-up content? Why haven't I written it? I've been waiting for a year 😭

What about the promised rebirth episode?

What about the promised rebirth episode?