Prince of Tennis: The Hole in the Hitomi Series, Hato and Ootori
网王瞳人之穴户凤系列
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 13k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 18y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
10Chapters
23Favorites
1.7kClicks per chapter
13Comments
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I'll help you add some points, keep up the good work, I support you.
The first half is the underworld, and the second half becomes the anatomy. The author replies: At first, it was written as anatomy, but later someone corrected it and changed it to underworld. Later, I felt it was wrong, so I changed it back. It hasn't changed since then. . . .
I agree with the internet fans, but I also think some of the lines are very contrived. For example, "Chotaro, what's wrong with you? Don't cry. Be good..."'... It makes people wonder if Chotaro is a kitten or a puppy... Madamada aoi dane
There are shortcomings, such as the appearance of the catchphrases of Atobe and others; the description of the characters' expressions and details is insufficient, and the characters of the original characters are captured, giving people a sense of running accounts. It's okay to pass eight times. I hope the author will learn from the lesson and keep trying. Author's reply: Thank you, it is a very pertinent suggestion. I will continue to work hard.
It's very good. It still feels a bit simple, but I think it's very stylish. Well, I will come to see it often.
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Big You're too much Very slow to update I'm not satisfied with my desires Strong demands Update soon!!!!!!!!!!! I strongly support Support support!!!!!!!!!!!!! Come on, the author replied: Dear, I will work hard and try harder!~~I will try to update a chapter tomorrow!~ Thank you for your support!~
Come on I strongly support Please update soon. The author replied: I will work hard! Thank you for your support!~
Scattered flowers scattered flowers Come on big I like it so much Come on, come on, come on awesome The great cause of BL was completed by DaDa. Author's reply: Thank you!~ I will continue to work hard to update!