Light in the Dark

Why do I see that the copywriting is garbled???

Let's give Qiqi's maiden novel a thumbs up first~ After all, there aren't many maiden novels that can be completed~ This thing can only be seen from the reader's perspective, and the author's perspective is currently incompetent~ First of all, the literary title is not attractive, and it is not strong enough in the text. I suggest that the title be a little more explicit~ As for the copywriting, it is short, and again, I have no desire to click in to read it. Although I clicked directly on the chapters, the copywriting is really important. Finally, let's talk about the main text. The writing is smooth and allows people to sort out the relationships without having to think about words and sentences. It can also be regarded as a cute little article suitable for reading during breaks. But in terms of the writing style, I thought it was a realistic style when I read the first chapter, but I couldn't feel the real life atmosphere. If it is a campus novel, it lacks the exaggerated conflict routines in the novel. So it feels... Well, a bit fluid. Also, the ending of each chapter is so short that it doesn't make people want to read on. It can leave some suspense, conflict, etc., So that people can have a feeling of anticipation~ As for the emotional scenes, they are not that impressive, and feel a bit like a trickle of water. . Looking at the whole story, I only remembered the words in the copywriting, and suggested that the main character scene at the ending should be more vivid and touching, instead of just stacking dialogues, otherwise the ending would be too hasty. Well, that's it in a nutshell~ I should not be venomous or venomous~ Well, okay? I wish Qiqi will make more progress and improvement in the next article, and strive to sign a contract~

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