Interstellar Powers: The Fuxi Zither Maiden

Emmmm Judging from the copywriting, the heroine (the central character) should be Feng Jiqin, but I can't tell it at all after reading the beginning. The author's copywriting is quite good, and there are all the bright spots. However, the main character portrayed in the article should still be more focused on the heroine. It is best if the reader can see it at a glance, "Hey, this is the protagonist." The distinctive features, big brain The holes are still very good, such as the collision of ancient culture and future interstellar, the collision of music and war. They are all very good themes and can diversify the imagination. Every writer starts as a newcomer, and every writer's hard work deserves respect. Not everyone who loves novels has the perseverance to write novels hahaha (like me, I can only talk about it_(:з)∠)_). I hope the author will stick to it. Best of luck to the above

The description of the heroine is too neutral, unable to feel the heroine's emotions at all, and her sense of presence is also very low. She is not as good as the two female supporting characters, one has a tragic life experience, and the other is pretentious and uneducated, both of whom are more like the heroine than her. And what the hell is this team? Forcibly blended together, is this multiple heroines? Something doesn't feel right...

The mute girl Qin can easily be thought of Sona, the harp fairy.

This is actually a group drama, right? Emmmmm, I told you earlier, I was still very interested in reading the text. I thought it was an updated and cool story about Gu Qin killing everyone with a war song. But up to now, I don't have a sense of immersion at all. I can't find which paragraph the heroine is in at a glance.

The heroine... Where is... There is a song for the heroine: "Where are you~ Where are you~"

It doesn't matter if other people call her mermaid. Why does the heroine also call her mermaid? Dongfang is obviously a mermaid.

There are so many typos

The one who secretly eats the beggar's chicken... Is he the male protagonist?

I obviously didn't bookmark this article, why did it automatically add it to my bookmark? ?

The author has worked hard to update the article, so here's a refresher!