The Entertainment Queen's Red Packet Group

I kind of hate the heroine, she feels very incompetent. Whenever something happens, she asks for help in the red envelope group, but she doesn't pay much attention to her. Does the heroine have nothing else to do but eat all day long? Foodies are not so exaggerated. The author still has a lot of room for improvement!

Why do you have to find a heroine? If the heroine doesn't want to be a queen, there are a lot of people to look for in the entertainment industry.

I always feel that the writing style is weird, and I don't know what the problem is. It just feels like it's stuffy and not very comfortable. But I like the subject matter very much. I hope the author will work harder.

It doesn't suit this style of writing, so I can't keep reading.

Did you write a cool article? I feel a little bored now, but if you ask me to tell you exactly where it is, I can't tell you. It's not that your writing is not good, it just feels wrong. I can't say specifically. Come on, come on, come on

The story unfolds a bit inexplicably. The characters feel very vague, there is no three-dimensional sense, there is no obvious conflict in the story, and there is no fascinating rhythm. I feel that the author's writing style is still good, but it may be too hasty in opening the hole. The beginning presented now is not very interesting. I suggest the author adjust it. Come on, come on.

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Is it Gu Qian San or Qian Gu San? It makes me laugh when I see it.

I really don't know what to say. I thought the first part was pretty good. The red envelopes in the entertainment industry were good. But the more I write about it, the more I write about it, the more I write about it. But the more I write about it, the more I write about it, the more I write about it. But the more I write about it, the more I write about transformations, time travel, mechas, various secondary names, and a brainless female supporting role. I feel that many of the cool points have not been written. From the chapter of Original Sin, I feel that it is not connected with the previous chapters. I wanted to read the comments, but no one commented. I thought the front part was good, so I bought them all in one go, and the results got worse and worse. I am becoming more and more mindless. I always felt that I didn't have enough to watch before, but later I wanted to finish it quickly and finish it quickly. Moreover, the promised film and television songs developed into a full-length description of transformation, singing, purification of the soul, and the male and female protagonists also came inexplicably. They traveled through time and space, walked into a fantasy world, and made a movie. It was really hard to know what to say, and there was nothing written in the copy. To be honest, it suddenly developed from an entertainment and entertainment article to such a messy transformation into a time-traveling mecha. I really can't accept it! ! ! Is there much description of the heroine's career? From the long fight to the heroine's development and career in one stroke, it's completely off topic. I really don't know what I'm writing about! (The author also knows that it is a bad article, and he is quite self-aware). (Bad reviews will be accepted)

Special tip!!! Starting from the next chapter, it will be completely released, and the style of painting will change suddenly. There's thunder ahead! Thunder! Thunder!