The Food Tycoon of the Nineties

Is the emotional line so abrupt? Isn't this a waste of time? The whole article only talks about less than ten recipes in the system?

Your leap is too big, right?

... I never expected it to be so perfunctory and bad.

The character of the heroine...

I thought I would at least start upgrading the route to defeat monsters, but it just disappeared.

You knew something was going to happen, so why did you have to come out?

What can I say, maybe I prefer to write more clearly. The plot was omitted so much that at first I thought the key point was to upgrade tasks, but later it became about making money, but in reality it was about winning prizes. It's so empty. Why is the heroine so powerful? What's wrong with the system? Normally, I like to be imaginative but don't like to write like this.

If the original apprentice was so worthless and vicious, wouldn't his master also lose value and appear to have no discernment, unable to recognize his character in ten years? The villain is too subtle and too stereotyped. This article has become tasteless

The writing is very nice, please update quickly.

The writing is very nice, please update quickly.