[Showbiz Crossover] The Crown Is Mine

It would be nice if there was no heroine in the end

It's a very good story. Min Rui's experience and character are very realistic, but it doesn't feel unrealistic. The doting on him by his uncle and brothers, the natural interactions with his brothers that are full of CP, always insisting that the team is greater than the individual, and his beautiful counterattacks when he was repeatedly questioned and hindered. These all made me like it very much and it was very enjoyable to watch. If there are other things I would like to say to the author, if the author sees it, just take a look. The first is the problem of the female protagonist. The main text of this article is set to have a female protagonist, but because the heroine was changed midway, it became a story with no CP in the main text and a new female protagonist in the side story. In fact, the original heroine and Min Rui were very different from each other. When I watched it, I didn't find it sweet. On the contrary, the interaction between the new heroine in the extra episode was very sweet. Moreover, the romance line is not well written. Although it is from the perspective of the male protagonist, it is not suitable for writing multiple female characters, like a female protagonist and a second female and a third female, especially in this kind of novel where it is not clear who the female protagonist is from the beginning. It is easy to feel that the male protagonist is half-hearted. One moment he is having an affair with this girl, and the other moment he has a special feeling for that girl. It doesn't feel sweet or refreshing to watch, but he becomes more and more bored with the original heroine and the co-star, and feels like he is being played around with. Fortunately, there are too few romance lines, accounting for about 1% of the entire text, so the impact is very small. But this is also another problem. The author writes the career line and team relationship very well, but the rhythm of the romance line is very bad. He is enjoying himself while watching the male protagonist pursue his career, and then suddenly inserts the description of the original female protagonist. I read it inexplicably, as if I was writing and suddenly remembered that there is a heroine in this article, so I took it out and took a look at the heroine and the supporting character. And maybe the problem is that the male and female protagonists have no rivalry, so I don't feel sweet or happy. I just feel that it disturbs me while reading the article, which will make me more bored with the original female protagonist. The second thing I want to say is that there is a big jump between chapters. Many plots are not started and written. Suddenly they end there and turn to a new chapter. It will be a bit inexplicable. I don't understand why I didn't write it anymore, which will reduce the sense of satisfaction. Many plots can be expanded and written, and it will be more enjoyable to write them completely. The third thing I want to say is the perspective of fans. When I read this article, I completely read it from Min Rui's perspective, but it lacked the perspectives of fans and viewers. That's not to say there's nothing at all. The character Yao Shaijing is from a fan's perspective, and the movie scenes and MV descriptions are also from an audience's perspective. These are very exciting. But there are no other things, such as participating in variety shows, finishing magazine shoots, every time I fight back, what effect the audience sees, what discussions are on the forum, and what is the reaction among the fan base. In the article, we can only understand a little bit through a few words, and it lacks the refreshing feeling of a perspective. Although it is quite long and has many shortcomings, I still like this article very much and think it is well written. It is an article that I will read three times and four times. In addition, the Bl extra story written by the author is sweet and exciting, so I really want to read the Bl story written by the author, it will definitely be very interesting.

I really like the author's wife's article. What I like most is that there is a heroine at the end. There is nothing wrong with it except that the heroine's appearance is too brief and a little rushed. I really like entertainment industry articles about love from the male protagonist's perspective.

I've finished reading the whole story. It's really good. I really like the male protagonist.

Please recommend Korean entertainment novels from the male protagonist's perspective. There is a literary shortage.

I really can't bear to read this article. I started to read it in December 2017, and until now, Min Rui has changed from a novel character to one. I really hope that Min Rui exists in the world, and I will continue to support him in the future! Congratulations on the completion!

Very well written and beautiful

Congratulations on the completion! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The extra story turns out to be an original female protagonist in bl and bg directions. Alas, it's better to have no cp. I always feel that the female protagonist is not worthy of the male protagonist. Maybe there is not enough space to understand it.

Very nice(??ω??)??