He was born into a distinguished family; she came from a renowned clan.
He had the bearing of a dragon and the grace of a phoenix; she was peerlessly beautiful.
He was a ruthless warlord, determined to build an empire, and had thought love would have no place in his life.
She was a beauty, yet brimming with talent, able to stand shoulder to shoulder with the great heroes of a turbulent age.
Was it the empire, the realm, their families, their fates, or the pull they felt toward each other that brought them together to compete in chaotic times, fight for the realm, and restore peace?
This is my first time writing a story, so it will surely have plenty of shortcomings. I hope you'll share your advice. I'll do my best to revise and keep improving it. Thank you in advance.
Strongly request to update, update
Oh, my character relationship table has become more complicated. If I go on, I will forget the names of the people in front of me.
I really like this chapter, the ambiguous extension~~~ But don't go too fast. The most beautiful stage of love is ambiguity. Hehe
This chapter is very smooth, and it connects well until the end.
I read this over several days. The writing is wordless and very gorgeous. The descriptions of the characters and the language are in line with the artistic conception of the story. There are many places where I feel like I am watching "A Dream of Red Mansions". The structure of the story is meant to be a long one from the beginning. Although some viewers felt that the story progressed too slowly, I thought it was okay. I like detailed descriptions, but just pay attention to the rhythm. Focusing on details will be boring. This is not a problem. But I still have to make a comment. In terms of character setting, everyone has a distinct personality, but the heroine Ye Ye is too heart-warming. I remember one chapter describing her as not being shy, not arrogant, and not high-minded, but in fact what I saw is that she is clearly an aloof person. Every time I see her super iceberg look, I want to crush her. Fortunately, as the plot develops, it gradually becomes warmer, and I hope that his personality will change in the future. In addition, in terms of personality, I personally prefer Yao Yuqing. Although she does not use much writing, I still feel that she is like a young lady from ancient times. I thought that he would have a triangle relationship with the hero and heroine. Can she find a good home? Too much to say, let's flash first~
This chapter is still more narrative, looking forward to the next chapter
The cold male protagonist is not good at all. He can only wear black and white, blue and gray clothes. If there were a different supporting character, like Liu Yong, a man who seems to not care about anything, would it be fun to wear clothes with big flowers on a white background?
What kind of confession is this? What I have been looking forward to for so long is actually such a confession! The author cut corners! Cutting corners!
I guess many articles have been written about this inn.
Tongfu Inn, laughing. . .