The Suona Flute Carried Me to Immortality.

Thanks for free. The story is a good one. It can be seen that I have worked very hard to write about fate. The past and present lives are wonderful. Maybe there are too many foreshadowings and the later descriptions are not good enough, so I was stunned for a while while reading some chapters. In fact, I feel that the ending is a bit sloppy. Prince Longya should be just a minor boss, and the appearance of the devil is a bit sloppy. Also, the fate of the heroine in this life seems to have been seen through by her master. I originally thought her grandfather was a big shot. Because the man in black also had foreshadowing in the previous chapter. In short, the world view of this article is very large but not fully displayed. It is not a traditional fairy tale, and the background of the characters is not clearly explained. It is basically introduced in a hurry, and it is confusing to read. For example, the male protagonist suddenly becomes the incarnation of thunder, and Lin Youwei is the fire? Mu Liu is the heroine's wisp of fairy thoughts? I didn't really understand it. It would be nice if the description could be more detailed and the final battle could be set up a little longer. The final battle feels as perfunctory as an ordinary trial for the heroine. And is the heroine and Chun Zhen sympathetic to each other? It's a bit strange. The above are all the doubts I have about reading this article! Anyway, the author is great! It's so cute to see the interaction between the words and comments!

Thanks for the discount, great story.

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Great, thank you very much!

The story is compact and beautiful, great writing

Second brush, I love you Tiantangtang^-^

Hey, hey, look at me. I'm not cute. As long as you work hard to update your text, I can be cute for you every day (*≧▽≦)

Hey, hey, look at me. I'm not cute. As long as you work hard to update your text, I can be cute for you every day (*≧▽≦)

I finished reading it in one go∩_∩Come on (*￣3￣)╭?? The little flowers will hit you

Very well written, very touching