How to Raise the Protagonist [Book Transmigration]

I knew it was a novel written after time travel, hahahahaha

It turns out that the introduction has told us that Xun Tianqi is a supporting role. . .

I haven't finished reading it, but I want to comment that the author's world view is too big and there are too many characters. Then there is nothing exciting about it, mainly because the world view is too big, there are too many worlds, the plot is too complicated, and there are too many characters. Unless you are drawing character structure diagrams while reading, it is difficult to read. You all know that there are connections between each other, and there are many foreshadowings, and you connect them step by step, but it is too much, too complicated, and too trivial. And the alternative ones are relatively bland. The "original work" inside is quite ups and downs. The protagonist's growth is relatively dull, and many events are like a passer-by, the audience's mentality. There's no sense of fun, either. Taste

It's quite interesting. I'm a bit shocked that the entire text is free. I feel like I could write more extras.

It's so readable. As a long novel, this book is really great. There are no bugs, the world view is huge, the plot is smooth, and the characters are well created.

I like this article very much. Although there are few emotional lines, I really hit the mark. There are too many characters who appear in the later stage and it is a bit confusing, but overall I still like it very much.

The idea is great, great, great! ! ! It's a pity that I was a little rushed to write it in the end. The most rare thing is that the entire text is free and it is written so well.

Is this the first time to read such a long article? Another world? The story hhh went from being a blur in the first hundred chapters to the more I read later, the more I read it, the more I started to understand. So many set characters, schools and their respective lines are really too strong! The two of them also had a happy ending! Sprinkle flowers~

Finished spreading flowers, the title should be how to develop a protagonist who makes soy sauce in his own novel, laugh

After reading it, I feel that it is very interesting. It is much more rigorous than many articles. Basically, all the holes that need to be filled in are filled in. The character creation is also good, but the relationship is really slow to warm up... However, since it was written without cp at the beginning, it is understandable. In short, thank you for telling us a good story ~ Xiaohuahua gives it to you ~