Anime Crossover: Gacha, Young Man?

The plot drags, the character setting is too hasty, the place where the slow flow should be long is written too hastily, and the place where rapid rapids should be bold is too delayed. The setting is obviously good, but it is annoying to watch. Forget it, why do you ask so much for a free article?

Tatara, you won't die, right?

To be honest, the logic of these recent chapters has been a bit inconsistent. When Tatara encountered danger in his dream, Zun felt full of regret. He regretted not communicating with Tatara immediately and pursuing it to the end. In this chapter, faced with the same situation where Tatara was hiding something, Zun actually said that he would figure it out sooner or later? In fact, from that chapter onwards, it was obvious that the author was speeding up the plot and changing the map. Generally speaking, the plot of being in danger in a dream is indeed a good time to clarify feelings - to bury the boss' hidden clues - and to change the map. However, it felt that it was too hasty and many details were not noticed. It's clear that Tatara feels very serious, but he can make jokes and worry about decoration problems immediately after waking up? Zun, too, thought in his heart that he would never let go of the person behind the scenes, but he didn't discuss the exchange of information together at all? If it is because of Tatara's withdrawn personality, then after communicating with each other, you can also express your worries. Everyone said that the close play will be locked. For the sake of life safety, it is okay to exchange information. In the plot, you can also provide information about the boss behind the scenes. This is obviously to save the need to change the map and catch up with the plot. If I want to inquire about this part of the information myself without communicating with Tatara, I should have said something before. After all, it was written earlier that I realized that I had no one to turn to when I encountered a mysterious problem. It is normal to have thoughts. It would be impossible for two people to catch the boss without mentioning a single word about it. According to the plot of Zun written in large letters, that paragraph should be a clear change in Zun's attitude towards Tatara, but in this chapter, there is no obvious change in Zun's attitude. I feel that my writing power has declined, and the plot arrangement is a bit out of control. I hope you will not rush the plot just to catch up with the plot. Proper water is also good. If you can't update every day, two or three days will be fine. It's late at night and the language is not carefully considered. I'm sorry. Finally, of course, no matter what I write, even if I don't leave many messages, I will be with you~^ω^

Tatara... Will he die? (Extremely panicked)

What a big bowl of dog food QAQ

No more updates? QQ

Damn, the Holy Grail War is all about the heart

Hahahahahahaha

Red and fiery, in a trance

There are eight dou of gun luck in the world, Zhao Zilong has one stone, and the others owe two dou in total.