Back to When My Dad Was Three [The 1970S]
重回我爸三岁时[七零]
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 18k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
5Chapters
36Favorites
5Nutrient gifts
1.2kClicks per chapter
29Comments
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Also, try to convey as little knowledge about the writer's data as possible (x) I sometimes go to BS, but I am still confused when I see the last chapter and legs, and it is more difficult for ordinary readers to understand. And... Certain two words always make me hallucinate the name of the coat in my district, it's so weird!
The second point is that this is a fanfic of Tiansan, but most readers (including me) may have only heard of Tiansan, but have not played it, and do not know the various settings and plots in the game. In this case, how to quickly explain this to readers and how to highlight the interest of Tiansan's background are both considerations in the copywriting and the first few chapters. When popularizing science, try to use as little slang as possible in the game. You can also explain the heroine's experience in the game while conducting science popularization around the game.
Well, I haven't read much of the article, so I can only offer some superficial opinions. Gugu, don't mind (bow). One is that the copywriting is relatively flat and lacks eye-catching features. Maybe we don't need to pile up a lot of popular elements like many articles, but the copy must have exciting or explosive points. In addition, the copywriting conveys relatively little information, and it is difficult to see the heroine's character from the copywriting, which inadvertently loses many readers. What kind of character is the heroine, pragmatic, naive, skinny, Neptune... And what kind of fragments should be used to express the protagonist's character?
First of all, I want to apologize, because that post was deleted, and I wanted to mention the ban gift package, so I changed my account to a smaller account... Then I got busy as school started, so I forgot about it...
Tweet, the post has been deleted, block it now = =
... Is it time to get married at the age of 22?
With it in hand, after a few lazy shakes, the author will start coding quickly! ! ! (Updated version)
Come on
... Hello baby, goodbye baby!