[Greek Mythology] Sacrifice

Sorry author, I just can't help it. I know you may have only read the fanfic, but what I wrote is really beyond my perspective. First of all, I'm not here to scold you, so please don't mind what I say below. I started reading the novel because of a recommendation from a friend. Let's talk about Danatus first. Danatus is the son of Nyx and a second-generation god. His divine power is stronger than that of Hecate. In Greek mythology, as well as in various fan fiction, because Danatus controls life and death, people feel dead. Because he has seen through life and death, there will be no such reactions as "dumbfounded" or "envy and jealousy". As for Hades, as the King of Hades, he was informal and dignified. As the Lord of the Underworld. [Zeus, my dear brother, what wind has brought you here. I thought you really forgot about the underworld, and your brother in the underworld] I think this sentence is either worn or broken. Zeus [I can rest assured that I will hand over the underworld to you, but you will personally approve it] Heaven and underworld are independent, so there is no option to hand over the underworld to you. Hades [seemed to have touched the left chest accidentally, which was beating much faster than usual. It has not been like this for a long time] [seeing Zeus's subtle reaction, his heart was relieved] Hades is not afraid of Zeus, and after all, he is the Lord of the Underworld. All this makes me feel that Hades is not afraid of Zeus. And Hades in the back is angry and has a headshot, and he is even a little tender towards the heroine. I think this is a cheat you opened for the heroine. But this Hades has collapsed. As Pluto, he will not have much emotional fluctuations. If anything, it's at least disguised. And after Hades saved people, he would at most save them and send them to a safe place before leaving, right? This behavior would be more appropriate for Apollo. Therefore, there is no option to use a friendly tone. The arrogance of the gods and the silence of Pluto will not cause these actions.

What should I say... It feels a bit ooc... I suggest the author read more fanfics written by other authors before writing the article, so that he can better grasp the characters' personalities. Come on(? ??_??)?! I would have written better if I didn't use OOC.

In fact, I have always felt that prophecies are things that lead people to a predetermined ending in the process of thinking that they are rewriting their destiny.

Being fucked? It makes me sick to my stomach every time I see this kind of plot. Putting aside everything else, I feel like the heroine has been ruined. Anyway, this doesn't sound like an attempt, which is disgusting. Even if it is an attempt, I don't know if the author will reply to me and explain it. Even if it is explained, I don't know how long it will take. I'll just call it a failure and see you later.

I'm very confused about whether Hades had an affair with Minta or anyone else

I want to torture Mingta and cause trouble.

Congratulations, it looks great~~ Is there any extra?

Congratulations on the completion, Mijiu

Finished spreading flowers, thank you for your hard work, the author (? ??_??)?

The cat leaves its claws after passing by~~Spread flowers~~~~~Looking forward to the next chapter