An early, immature work. There's no need to read it.
Blurb:
[The Sixth Story]:
You are the general, and I am the chancellor. In this life, general and chancellor, we shall never meet again.
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Jue: farewell.
From the very beginning, this was the only road home for her and him.
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Many years later, when Su Juanbing climbed the border city's tower to watch the stars, he would surely remember the year he and Lang Huan admired the twin stars Guanlang and Shiying beneath the roof of a ruined house.
Now the twin stars had dimmed and were about to fall, and he too was old and frail, no longer the dashing figure he had once been.
"Old General, now that the realm has been united, what would you still like to do?" asked the young officer who admired him.
He smiled, and a streak of starlight flashed across his eyes. The Guanlang Star had fallen.
"I want to see her once more."
His final words were spoken softly.
But he knew it was already an impossible wish.
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This is the sixth story in A Volume of Ice and Snow.
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Theme:
I just finished reading the whole article, and I hesitate to write a review. It's my first time to write and I'm a bit unsure about how to write. I'm afraid that I won't be able to write well. I read this article intermittently, but it's very in line with my taste! Maybe I just like that kind of sad tone, and then the end of be hahahaha, I really cried when I saw Erhu died at the end, and Guanlang Star Pendant also hinted that Su Juanbing was dead. I suddenly remembered that when the young general in the copy asked the old and frail Su Juanbing what else he wished for, they were thousands of miles apart, and one was far away in Beijing. Cheng, one guarding the border, has not seen each other for more than ten years. I am a very picky person. Although only a few words can cover so many years, I will think about them having been separated for so many years, loving each other and crying without seeing each other, and I can't help but feel sad. In my eyes, that short paragraph in the copywriting is also a small extra, hahaha. , Because when I saw the ending, I felt that the two paragraphs were cleverly connected. It turned out that I had such an epiphany. I didn't read the article very carefully at first, and I didn't pay close attention to the three words of General Prime Minister. , I am a general, and we will never meet each other in this life." "Farewell, farewell." I suddenly realized that their endings had already been decided. I often thought that when Su Juanbing calmed down the border, he could return to Beijing and continue to be his general. Why did the two of them end up like this? , But as said in the book, because of the feud in Zurich, because of the pros and cons of the court, and because of serving the new king, there are too many factors that separated them. (My bad taste is that I like to watch BE, but every time I can't help crying, I think of thousands of good endings for them.) Hey, I personally feel that the previous article is a bit rushed. Maybe it is longer and I can see a more complete life of them. I was curious before, why did Su Juanbing suddenly fall in love with Li Wei? , And then I thought, every time I feel that love comes suddenly, but the word love is inherently incomprehensible (I have never understood it) and when did Li Wei start to fall in love? Maybe it started from the tentative kiss in the sky prison, maybe it started from the wooden box I received every year for my birthday, maybe it started when my life was hanging by a thread in the mountains, and when I saw Su's childhood experience in the extra story, I couldn't help but feel a little sad. I like the characters of both Su and Li, especially Especially, I have always liked the image of Li Weinu who disguises herself as a man and enters the court as an official. She is an independent and strong-willed woman who serves the king and the people proudly throughout her life. "He is trying to find a way out between you and him." Yes, people who truly love each other are still choosing for each other even if they are struggling at every step. I really like the second half of the plot. I don't know what I was talking nonsense. There is no logic in it, and the writing can't express what I think, but the big words are really good! It's very ancient. I also want to read the story of the Jade Emperor breaking up young lovers every day. Hahahahahahaha. It also suits my bad taste. It's late at night. So far, "The Secret of Generals" is the first long review I have written seriously. I like this book very much and every character in it. The writing is great! I hope the author is in good health, safe and happy, and writes good stories one after another! (Very much looking forward to it))
You hold a high position and privileges and still look down on others. Why don't you eat minced meat?
I thought Li Wei had some back-up to deny his daughter's identity, he confessed so quickly
Fortunately, the eldest prince was saved! It's touching to see that his affection for Lang Huan is stronger than that of his own brother. If I were to be assassinated by Su Juanbing, I would directly hate the male protagonist... I don't know why I saw Xu Jing's name A gray-haired middle-aged uncle will directly appear in his mind. So it's just a matter of not giving him random emotions from the beginning to the end.
5555You gave birth to me before you gave birth to me! It's so uncomfortable!
Sure enough, as the old saying goes, women who dress up as men are from the privileged class [oh oh oh] [oh oh oh]
It's a bit desolate, maybe it's a bit too unclean...
Haha, I'm so angry with him. It smells so jealous.
I don't think it's cruel. They will eventually find and fall in love with each other in reincarnation.
I can't help but be curious about the story of the Jade God. I like the author's writing style. Some of the dialogues are answered with poems, which has a unique charm. It feels elegant and comfortable to read. I don't think the ending is very sad. Although they never saw each other again in the course of the calamity, But at least the hearts are connected, The bond between souls is more important than the body, so for me, their ending is considered HE. In addition, it's great that both parties didn't get carried away by the relationship! (I'm most afraid of seeing the protagonist degenerate into a love brain...)