[Don’t read this, don’t read this, seriously, don’t read this! This is really not worth reading! (shouting!) Don’t read it out of curiosity... and don’t make me get on my knees and beg you!!!]
[The “I was young and foolish” series of nonsense]
He set out on a mission, met her by chance, and found happiness for a lifetime, made a promise for a lifetime, and changed for a lifetime. Beneath the peach blossoms, beside the willow-lined stream, in front of the broken bridge, they met, fell in love, and stayed together, only for it all to end in a dream.
A graceful young man, a delicate girl of sixteen: who were they? By a twist of fate, their paths were impossible to discern.
Who roams the world with a sword, and who holds a fan through the ages?
The nine-tailed fox, Ling Taoyao, and the jade flute: who will bear the sorrow?
Where did this chance encounter begin, and where will it end?
Alas, the faces remain the same, yet the world has changed beyond recognition... and...
If everything is an illusion, and life and death are already decreed by Heaven, then in this dreamlike youth, in these fleeting years... even in this life, I would still choose to stand by your side as your brother, hand in hand, sharing our lives and deaths!
Theme: Everything changes, but the heart’s original intention remains.
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The girl is amazing! It was so thrilling to watch that I even forgot to eat. Sending you a big thumbs up.
Mi Yun also has a vicious younger sister who looks the same? Girl, your foreshadowing is really deep.
The beginning of this chapter is so scary... It made my hair stand on end.
The author should be a classical girl, her vocabulary is really good enough to excerpt and study, very good vocabulary! This is the biggest advantage of this article! I have to be honest, I was not prepared to write a review before, because the subject matter and general plot of this article, including the setting of the heroine, are indeed not my favorite type. I wanted to quit after reading about 5 chapters, but when I clicked back to the table of contents, the author was very insistent, 200,000 words and 75 chapters! I feel very powerful, and I searched a few sentences specifically, and found that the classical words, whether they are difficult or simply piled up, at least the ones I searched for, cannot be found on Baidu. I feel like the author is really great at this.
Secondly, the author is too good at this aspect. The vocabulary is so gorgeous that it attracts all the attention to the vocabulary itself. The story cannot leave a big impression on me. Simply speaking of novels, I feel that this novel really cannot attract me. "The Immortal Negative" is better than many literary works. They are all more gorgeous, but the story itself is actually not strong. After reading five chapters, I am not very impressed by the male and female protagonists. The deepest impression is, "Wow, the author is amazing and has a great vocabulary." I think from the author's point of view, readers are not happy if they think this way.
Then I scrolled to chapter 75, which is the latest chapter. I was very surprised to find that by chapter 75, although the writing style still felt as gorgeous as showing off skills, at least it did not make people focus all their attention on the vocabulary itself. In other words, through 200,000 words of exercise, the author at least improved his storytelling ability. A good novel must tell a good story, and the method of presentation is as important as the storytelling. Maybe I didn't like the beginning of the story enough as a reader, so I missed a good story. I don't know if that's the case, but I really admire the author's persistence in his story. Although writing 200,000 yuan in three months is not much, many people give up halfway through writing. I believe that the story I did not read is a good story, because for the author, the story he made up is the best story no matter what.
I hope the author can finish telling this story, because what is missing most in this world is persistence! And comparing the first few chapters with the following chapters, the improvement in narrative ability is really obvious. I feel that it should be enough with more practice. After all, writing skills can be practiced, but vocabulary is hard to come by. Author girl, come on!
The author is really attentive and depicts the characters in detail. It's what's in my heart
It was so thrilling, both Gong Luo and Xiang Xiang were so amazing! I still prefer Laiyu^_^
So far, the writing is a bit deliberately pursuing ancient culture, but the character description, speech, and behavior of the main and supporting characters are very modern. I always thought it was weird before, but I couldn't describe it. Now I finally had an idea and caught the adjective (^_^)(^_^)(^_^)
This is also why I said it was obscure before. The author describes scenery and other things, trying his best to pursue the antique style, and uses a lot of four-character words to create a classical atmosphere. The effect is not bad, but when it comes to the protagonist's words and deeds, it seems to fall apart, or the style of painting suddenly changes and is too modern. It's so out of place. Obviously the protagonist and many supporting characters are not modern people, and the characters are not street gangsters, otakus, etc., But the author's description is very modern and down-to-earth, especially the words he speaks, do not feel like ancient people...
Well, the specifics are still a bit unclear. But let's stop here first. I'm going to cook. The author will work hard.
All ordered. Hehehe~(≧▽≦)/~I love you so much
Update faster, faster, wait for the update, anxious
What's next, wait for the big update^_^^_^
The girl is amazing! It was so thrilling to watch that I even forgot to eat. Sending you a big thumbs up.
Mi Yun also has a vicious younger sister who looks the same? Girl, your foreshadowing is really deep.
The beginning of this chapter is so scary... It made my hair stand on end.
The author should be a classical girl, her vocabulary is really good enough to excerpt and study, very good vocabulary! This is the biggest advantage of this article! I have to be honest, I was not prepared to write a review before, because the subject matter and general plot of this article, including the setting of the heroine, are indeed not my favorite type. I wanted to quit after reading about 5 chapters, but when I clicked back to the table of contents, the author was very insistent, 200,000 words and 75 chapters! I feel very powerful, and I searched a few sentences specifically, and found that the classical words, whether they are difficult or simply piled up, at least the ones I searched for, cannot be found on Baidu. I feel like the author is really great at this. Secondly, the author is too good at this aspect. The vocabulary is so gorgeous that it attracts all the attention to the vocabulary itself. The story cannot leave a big impression on me. Simply speaking of novels, I feel that this novel really cannot attract me. "The Immortal Negative" is better than many literary works. They are all more gorgeous, but the story itself is actually not strong. After reading five chapters, I am not very impressed by the male and female protagonists. The deepest impression is, "Wow, the author is amazing and has a great vocabulary." I think from the author's point of view, readers are not happy if they think this way. Then I scrolled to chapter 75, which is the latest chapter. I was very surprised to find that by chapter 75, although the writing style still felt as gorgeous as showing off skills, at least it did not make people focus all their attention on the vocabulary itself. In other words, through 200,000 words of exercise, the author at least improved his storytelling ability. A good novel must tell a good story, and the method of presentation is as important as the storytelling. Maybe I didn't like the beginning of the story enough as a reader, so I missed a good story. I don't know if that's the case, but I really admire the author's persistence in his story. Although writing 200,000 yuan in three months is not much, many people give up halfway through writing. I believe that the story I did not read is a good story, because for the author, the story he made up is the best story no matter what. I hope the author can finish telling this story, because what is missing most in this world is persistence! And comparing the first few chapters with the following chapters, the improvement in narrative ability is really obvious. I feel that it should be enough with more practice. After all, writing skills can be practiced, but vocabulary is hard to come by. Author girl, come on!
The author is really attentive and depicts the characters in detail. It's what's in my heart
It was so thrilling, both Gong Luo and Xiang Xiang were so amazing! I still prefer Laiyu^_^
So far, the writing is a bit deliberately pursuing ancient culture, but the character description, speech, and behavior of the main and supporting characters are very modern. I always thought it was weird before, but I couldn't describe it. Now I finally had an idea and caught the adjective (^_^)(^_^)(^_^) This is also why I said it was obscure before. The author describes scenery and other things, trying his best to pursue the antique style, and uses a lot of four-character words to create a classical atmosphere. The effect is not bad, but when it comes to the protagonist's words and deeds, it seems to fall apart, or the style of painting suddenly changes and is too modern. It's so out of place. Obviously the protagonist and many supporting characters are not modern people, and the characters are not street gangsters, otakus, etc., But the author's description is very modern and down-to-earth, especially the words he speaks, do not feel like ancient people... Well, the specifics are still a bit unclear. But let's stop here first. I'm going to cook. The author will work hard.