Where Can the Wild Geese Find Their Way Home?

The heroine actually came from time travel.

I like this beginning, the description is very delicate and quite attractive.

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See the shadows of the Four Powers and Five Saints

Although it was a bit rushed, it felt good to see the conclusion. It seems that many complicated entanglements have been hidden under the trivial daily life, and finally come to an end. Looking at the final ending, a certain person felt moved in his heart. It turns out that life can still be like this. Like her, she was frightened, timid, wary, and indifferent, but after the end was over, she let go, opened up, accepted, and was strong. With her unique calm temperament, she found a calm position in this complicated world, soberly and without hesitation; Like him, he is scheming, ruthless, pretentious, and refuses to be saved, but when he goes through all kinds of physical and mental exhaustion, he chooses, gives up, realizes, and saves himself, becoming truly peaceful and gentle. Two unparalleled people, a unique journey of mind. She waited unhurriedly, waiting for him to return from the blue sea and blue sky. He walked among the vast world, sorted and settled, and let time make its decision. Finally, after a year passed, they stood opposite each other. There is no doubt that in the days to come, they will treat each other like family. And this is far from the end, their story will continue forever, going on beyond words - this is not the life that the two of them have always longed for. Someone who has always liked the people in this story asked quietly: Will we let them appear in future stories? I hope you will write their side story when Hui Bi has free time~ Attachment: I feel that there is indeed a lack of explanation of what happened after death, which makes the following article seem a bit abrupt. Also, first-person writing is not as good as third-person writing. The advantage of first-person is that you can peek into the character's heart. Keep up the good work! I always support you!

The peach blossoms are as bright as clouds, and together with the burning clouds on the horizon, they form a sea. The sound of the piano floats in the evening wind vaguely, and there is a sense of helplessness that you can't stop talking. Dressed in red, he was leaning against the tree, with a smile on his lips. Her eyelashes were slightly lowered, and she glanced thoughtfully at the person playing the piano. The breeze blew by, causing the clothes to fly. The man playing the piano suddenly stopped and stared at the man in red. What a peerless appearance that is, with autumn water as beautiful as jade as bones, but the description of this person seems to be a little short of the mark. The handsomeness of the man, the gentleness of the woman... Make people feel trance-like. "Why did Azhao stop?" He picked up a peach blossom that had fallen into the air and asked lightly. Zhao Azhao sighed slightly, stood up and shook the petals on his clothes, and said, "How about playing a song on Jade Bones?" Qiu Yugu played with the peach blossoms in his hand, glanced at Qin covered with fallen flowers, and shook his head, "Not good." He paused, and without waiting for Zhao Azhao to say anything more, he added, "Azhao has a lot on his mind?" Zhao Azhao was slightly startled, then sat back by the piano, raised his hand and started stroking it again. The sound of the piano was still as smooth as before, but gradually became dull, and in the end, no one could hear anything. Zhao Azhao never had anything to worry about... Dressed in red and listening, a smile gradually bloomed on her lips, her smile was like a flower, and the beauty of the ocean was immediately eclipsed by this smile, so enchanting and unreal in its beauty. Zhao Azhao buried his head in playing the piano and stopped looking at him. Qiu Yugu, Qiu Yugu, every word of yours is so real, but I think you are so ethereal? What is the reality under such stunning appearance? Snap! A string broke and passed across Zhao Azhao's fingertips in the air. His hand froze in the air for a long time. "It's broken." Qiu Yugu said lightly. "Yes." Zhao Azhao stood up again, glanced at him, turned and left. Qiu Yugu could clearly see that his eyes were like a deep pool, so calm without a single ripple that no one could tell what he was thinking. This is the real Zhao Azhao! Qiu Yugu smiled slightly and followed immediately. Zhao Azhao paused and asked the person behind him, "Yugu, if I lose one day, what will happen to you?" Qiu Yugu's little finger twisted a strand of black hair and played with it. She chuckled when she heard Ah Zhao's words, "When did Ah Zhao become the person who refuses to give up?" "Will you save me?" Zhao Azhao asked again. "If it's Ah Zhao, I will save him. If it's Zhao Dezhao, it has nothing to do with me." Qiu Yugu always had a charming smile on her lips, and her red dress blended into the large patchwork of flowers, which became increasingly unreal. Zhao Azhao turned around, stared at this bewildering face, and smiled helplessly. When is it Ah Zhao and when is it Zhao Dezhao? He is very scheming and has no problem calculating with any means, but he has never understood Qiu Yugu's heart, neither Ah Zhao nor Zhao Dezhao. In Zhao Dezhao's heart, success as a king and defeat as a bandit is an eternal truth. Ever since he embarked on this road of seeking power, he has always been the king. Even if he fails or loses his life, he will not frown. But, Jade Bones, from the day Ah Zhao met you, Ah Zhao has no relationship with Zhao Dezhao anymore. If not, then they are sharing this body. Zhao Azhao sighed and walked out of the forest, but Qiu Yugu did not follow him, but turned around and went back. The fallen flowers are colorful, and the autumn jade bones can actually step on the thickly piled petals without using internal force, and the soles of the feet are faintly fragrant. He stood in front of the piano, picked up the broken string with his white fingers, looked at it for a long time, sat down, plucked with his fingertips, and a clear and spiritual sound slowly flowed out. The red lips opened slightly, "The bells in the morning and the drums in the evening, the sun moves and the clouds move. I am afraid of leaning against the window and pairing the hook string alone. I am going on an orchid boat, and I am far away from a red building. I am afraid of the deep cold, and my sleeves are light fur. In the dream of flowers blooming, the moon is hidden in the mountains. The years pass by the water, following the waves. Like the flowing light and shadow, it is too uncertain, too hurried..." "If you go to Lanzhou, you will also be far away from Red Mansion..." Qiu Yugu chuckled. If, if Ah Zhao knew that he was watching with cold eyes, would he still ask today? If Ah Zhao knew that he couldn't tell Zhao Ah Zhao from Zhao Dezhao, would he still ask today? If Azhao knew that his Qiu Yugu also lamented that things were uncertain, but he still had to ask today... He no longer thought about these things. He once thought that he could really come and go as he pleased. However, only he knew how deep the swamp under his feet had sunk and whether he could extricate himself.

Speaking of Hongyan, I still remember the indifference of playing chess and drinking tea in Lihua Village in the first film. That kind of day like wandering clouds and wild cranes is exactly what I yearn for, so I read the first chapter carefully many times. In the author's fresh and elegant writing style, the appearance of the two stubborn people gradually became clear in front of me. At first, I felt that Yao's world should be this kind of slow and elegant story. At that time, looking at her writing style, I compared it to Clivia, which is calm and not too gorgeous, but gradually you can see its connotation, grace and integrity, and I have the least resistance to this style of writing. When I watched Hongyan, the first part was almost finished. At that time, I felt like I was standing at this end of the river, watching the group of people trudging in the distance, but I never moved even half a step. I once lamented Duanmu Qinghong's determination, I once felt agitated by Liu Yuerong's selfishness, and I once felt heartbroken by Duanmu Wuyou's indifference... But all of this was told so gently and calmly in the author's writing. Until I saw Qiu Yugu, he was charming, charming, and charming. Every time I think about it, I can always clearly remember his peerless and independent look dressed as Duanmu Qinghong and standing among the flowers. He is like a poppy blooming among orchids, gorgeous but lonely. I think there are very few readers of Hongyan who are not attracted to him, including myself. So I followed his lonely footsteps, lonely from beginning to end, until the end. Just before I wrote this review, I thought the person I had been looking at was Qiu Yugu. When Hongyan was in the second and third stage, I gave Yao a lot of opinions, many of which I was dissatisfied with Hongyan, and she was also struggling with each step, and she probably scrapped a lot more manuscripts than you have seen. So I also carried my luggage and accompanied those stubborn children on the road. When they paused, I also waited. I have never liked Zhao Dezhao, or Zhao Azhao. Even when Duanmu Wuyou was in jail because of a peach blossom, the words Zhao Dezhao said made me feel that he was a villain. But at this time, looking at the overall situation, I got to know Zhao Dezhao again. He has been hiding in a place invisible to others, controlling the development of the entire situation. He is ambitious, wise, good at tricks, and good at calculations. He can be described as a great conspirator. People who can achieve great things are often not ruthless, but able to abandon feelings or even make use of them. From an emotional point of view, this may be despicable, but those who want power and success, and who can force themselves to do this, should not only be a tyrant of a generation, but also a hegemon, as Zhao Dezhao is. I can't believe that a shrewd person like him doesn't know about Xiao Qinqin's love, and I can't believe that when he asked Qiu Yugu to help him, he completely ignored the affectionate cooperation between the two. Zhao Dezhao had a deep love for Qiu Yugu, but he suppressed it in his heart, letting that feeling corrode his heart, and letting the red dress linger in his mind, but his face remained calm. I would rather be separated from Qiu Yugu by a wall forever and not be able to grow old together hand in hand. But he didn't escape. He could completely admit from his heart that he fell in love with a man. The moment my view of Zhao Dezhao changed was also the second before his life disappeared. At that time, he sat calmly on the chair, calmly faced the person he loved most, calmly welcomed the failure that followed, and let the swords and swords flash outside the house. At that moment, Zhao Dezhao understood that he had really failed. He had completely failed from love to seeking power, and he had nothing, even his own life. But he just slowly played with the dagger and said, "Jade Bone... Actually, I can't blame you. You know my temper just like I know you... Although I, Zhao Dezhao, have not been very upright in my life, I have never regretted my choices. I have become a king or a loser, even if I am crippled, crazy, or dead... If Even if I go back in time and give me another chance, I still don't regret choosing this path, because if I live, I will definitely come back. I am different from you. If I don't have the ambition to dominate in my heart, Zhao Dezhao will not be Zhao Dezhao! It's just... Even though I understand your heart, I still don't accept it..." This kind of Zhao Dezhao is like a glimpse, until he really leaves, when he is really silent, it will make people sigh and feel all kinds of tangled regrets. Hongyan is over, Duanmu Wuyou wanders around the world, Liu Yuerong waits persistently, and Qiu Yugu grows old overnight. It turns out that the person who can afford to let go is not the seemingly ruthless Duanmu Wuyou, nor the strong Liu Yuerong, nor the evil Qiu Yugu, but Zhao Dezhao! Yao Yao once said that he once planned an ending to "forget each other in the world". I think the only person who can really do it is Zhao Dezhao. But with Zhao Dezhao's temperament, only at this moment before his death could he forget about feelings, forget about seeking power, and treat things indifferently. However, only such Zhao Dezhao can make Qiu Yugu frown, and he is worthy of making Qiu Yugu heartache. Suzhou on March 27th

Although it was a bit rushed, it felt good to see the conclusion. It seems that many complicated entanglements have been hidden under the trivial daily life, and finally come to an end. Looking at the final ending, a certain person felt moved in his heart. It turns out that life can still be like this. Like her, she was frightened, timid, wary, and indifferent, but after the end was over, she let go, opened up, accepted, and was strong. With her unique calm temperament, she found a calm position in this complicated world, soberly and without hesitation; Like him, he is scheming, ruthless, pretentious, and refuses to be saved, but when he goes through all kinds of physical and mental exhaustion, he chooses, gives up, realizes, and saves himself, becoming truly peaceful and gentle. Two unparalleled people, a unique journey of mind. She waited unhurriedly, waiting for him to return from the blue sea and blue sky. He walked among the vast world, sorted and settled, and let time make its decision. Finally, after a year passed, they stood opposite each other. There is no doubt that in the days to come, they will treat each other like family. And this is far from the end, their story will continue forever, going on beyond words - this is not the life that the two of them have always longed for. Someone who has always liked the people in this story asked quietly: Will we let them appear in future stories? I hope you will write their side story when Hui Bi has free time~ Attachment: I feel that there is indeed a lack of explanation of what happened after death, which makes the following article seem a bit abrupt. Also, first-person writing is not as good as third-person writing. The advantage of first-person is that you can peek into the character's heart. Keep up the good work! I always support you!

At the end, when Dada was talking about the conclusion of Hong San's essay, there was only one unreasonable sigh left in his mind: It's another year. For a year, I followed Hongyan's footsteps and watched myself go from being surprised and impatient at the beginning to now waiting quietly and taking care of things casually. I suddenly realized that time really has the power to make all situations fade away, and it will continue to carry the people and things placed in it to unknown distances. Fortunately, they are accompanied by their great pens, which continue to resonate with people's hearts. So let me talk about my current views on them. No worries. In Da Da's writing, his experience has been full of twists and turns, giving people a sense of ups and downs, great joy and great sorrow. With the former gentle and elegant Mr. Duan Er gone, the sinister, evil and even violent side of his character has become more and more prominent, his actions have become more erratic, and his mood has become more and more unstable. However, I can understand that people are not made of iron, and they are not really hard-hearted, nor can they put aside everything and focus on nothing. Therefore, in the face of the sudden and overturning situation, the unpredictable people's hearts, the conspiracy like a dense rain, and the truth that comes one after another, countless variables come together. No matter how smart and well-planned he is, facing these things that he cannot control, he can only fight, gamble, test again and again, and force himself to believe, and then he will be tired, helpless, and even hesitant, and want to cheer up, but God will not help him. His heart was like a string that was getting tighter and tighter, and finally, it was on the verge of collapse - the kind of collapse that came to an end in silence. He didn't know how he lived every day in the Yellow Spring Valley. He was like a trapped animal, struggling to escape alone, unable to fully trust even his best friends. He should value them very much, so he decisively takes action that he thinks is best for them, but he only has a slight hope in their understanding. His feelings for Xiao Rong were also complicated. He clearly didn't want to be too involved with her, but he took steps again and again; he thought he had seen through her, selfish and indifferent, not caring about everything, staying away from the world, caring and suffering, but even if he complained, he would not really hate her. There should always be a thin veil between him and her, so that he could occasionally stop and look at her. But everything was messed up when she woke up from the dream. When she started to learn to stand up, she stumbled towards him, trying to get closer to him. This was something he didn't expect, so he was shocked or angry? He wanted to push her away, but she said such firm words. When dawn came that night, his mood must have been complicated, including confusion that he didn't know how to face. As for Zhao Dezhao, I thought he should hate him, not that he wanted to seize the dragon throne by any means, but that he pushed himself to death without leaving any room. He hated him that he had to risk his life to join the game and play a painful show with him, so that he had to be cautious in every step. A slight mistake would ruin his own happiness and even the happiness of those connected with him. For this, he had paid a huge price, and if his life could never go back to the past, he would have to pay it back. Unlike He Sili, who seems indifferent to the world, and Zhu Xiaoyu, who is detached and optimistic and seems ignorant of the world, Duanmu Wuyou is a human being, and his mood is more real. I don't know what other readers think of him, but because of this truth, a certain person has always liked him and always believed in him inexplicably. Probably the same is true for Xiaohe and Xiaoyu~ (laughs~) The outer packaging can be blurred, but as the most vivid character in the novel, I hope that I can always write about him truly, and not fall into the trap of idealization or extremeness accidentally. Although I know that writing about him is the most difficult thing to grasp. Yue Rong. First of all, congratulations to her for breaking free from the locked cage, even though she is scarred. Until now, she is still in the recovery period, so she is so free to follow her own heart. I don't know how she will persist in staying by his side when she completely regains her rationality and self-control? I think she herself doesn't know what her feelings are for Xiaoyou. She just desperately wants him to be happy after experiencing and witnessing all the tragedies. Xiao Rong has always been docile and smart in the past, but because of the cowardice she showed from time to time, I was worried about her. But now seeing her rebellious attitude, coupled with her intelligence, I feel that she will make everyone recognize her again. She is tactful but not ruthless. I wonder if she will be able to play an important role in the next round? I hope that when she can finally smile calmly, she can be truly calm. Autumn jade bone. This is a character that I didn't really like at first. I always thought he was enchanting but ruthless. I thought he should be the same character as Xiaoyou, but he wasn't honest enough. After seeing this, I started to like him, and found that he was not what I originally thought. He seemed to be in a thick fog, making it hard to see clearly, but he was truly as free and easy as a fairy. When everyone was trapped in the quagmire and struggling, he came without warning and left without any regrets. It was as if he was the only one in the world doing things based on his own whim. He seems to be the most comfortable and at ease, never being controlled by others, but there is an untouchable sadness in his eyes. Someone feels that he is unhappy and unhappy, but cannot see what he really wants, and does not know what else can be given to him, so he is heart-wrenching. He should like Xiao Rong and want her to be happy. This feeling is not like the love between a man and a woman, but more like sympathy. He originally envied Xiaorong, envied her indifferent way of staying out of things, so he wanted to protect her. He seemed to feel the pain Xiao Rong suffered, and this kind of protection and compassion would probably continue. And between him and Zhao Dezhao, it's not something that can be explained clearly by simply loving or not loving each other. Between the two of them, he always advances and retreats appropriately. He could only say that he cared about this friend, but at the same time, he also clearly knew what kind of path Zhao Dezhao was embarking on. I really want to know about Jade Bone's past, those obscure years, those obscure thoughts. I really couldn't bear to see him secretly feeling sad thousands of miles away. I suggest you write a side story about him no matter what. Zhao Dezhao. He is smart and ruthless, but his sharp edge is too obvious. This is probably the main reason why he failed to win the throne in the end. The path he took had to give up a lot of things. He was angry, confused, and even tried desperately to save... Someone felt that he was not mature enough. To him, Jade Bone is like a person who has taken the first step in the vast wilderness. What his future will bring, Jade Bone can see, and Jade Bone's heart is more transparent. Yuxiangtian. This man is as bright as the bright moon, he is magnanimous, behaves in a measured manner, and he is also wise and courageous. Compared with other people who are different and eccentric, he is much more normal and model. He is definitely a gentleman who can make people fall in love at first sight. I don't know him well enough, so I don't know if there is any hidden meaning behind this impression. It can be said that the characters are all successfully created, but there are some small flaws. For example, for Xiao Qinqin, I felt that her obsession and resentment towards Zhao Dezhao were not highlighted until this film, which was a bit hasty. The foreshadowing in the previous part seemed not enough, and only made people feel her domineering and unruly, leaving no room for other things to be savored. There is also Duanmu Jin. He is sometimes stern, sometimes respectful, sometimes calm, and sometimes unable to control his emotions. It sounds a bit contradictory in reading. I think these contradictions can be reconciled, but the connection between the characters' emotions is not natural enough. It feels like it is stuck and cannot be swallowed. You still need to be patient and don't be impatient. Even though the pace of writing is accelerated, you still need to give enough time for the psychological transition of the characters. You might as well slow down here, which will reduce a lot of abruptness. Next is the structure of the full text. I think the overall framework is very good, every link is closely linked, every step is unexpected and natural, and the plot design is well done. It's just that the construction didn't feel very neat. One of the important reasons was that the time and place changed frequently. As a result, each line was inserted into a blank before it extended down long enough for people to sort out. So after reading the whole book, when I went back and traced it, I just felt that it was all going around and I couldn't figure out the clues in the chaos. I don't have a good idea yet, but please think about how to make the plot more coherent and smooth. Haha~ I've almost finished everything I wanted to say. During this year, Hongyan's code grew longer and longer, and I also experienced many things and understood many things, the most important of which is: there is absolutely no need for love in life, but there is absolutely no need for family or friendship. Therefore, the most touching thing in the whole text is the friendship between the three people. The three tolerate each other and understand each other's character. They never interfere or restrict each other on weekdays, but they know how to give each other the help and... Trust they need most at the most appropriate time. Such friends can be by each other's side even if they are far apart. I can't help but sigh: Such a friend is really rare but hard to find... Ah... I didn't realize I said so much. Don't think I'm wordy~ I'm really looking forward to the scene between Xiaoyou's brother and Xiaoyou! Finally... Come on! Come on, too!

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