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I accidentally watched it for the second time. The early stage of the work was very good, but the later stage really fell apart. It just feels like the protagonist's personality suddenly starts to change and becomes a bit annoying. If you want to emphasize the pursuit of fairness, I think it still needs to be paved. Too straight. Probably starting from those few trainees, it was a bit awkward. The protagonist makes demands too confidently, stands on the opposite side of the family at the end, etc. It is too straightforward and too natural. It would be very dramatic if it was well prepared and exaggerated, but the problem is that there is no such thing. This wipes away the distinctive side of the entire character in the early stage. He should be a very strong and thoughtful person. But later on, I became dependent and brainless. I became less like a person who struggled in reality but still maintained an innocent heart. Instead, I became more like a person who stayed in the garden and read some so-called noble books, and was completely idealistic and inhumane. The plot is too simple, which makes the protagonist look stupid, and the description of human nature is too idealistic. The protagonist shouldn't have become so stupid in the later period. Many things feel unexplained, such as why he rejected Director Jiang's movies so many times, and the variety show was simply unnecessary. It could have been deleted directly, but it would only amplify the flaw. Let's refine it a bit more. The front and back divisions are too big.

I guess I stopped updating this article when it was about to end. I didn't have the patience to wait for updates, so I picked it up tonight and completed the ending. In fact, I have almost forgotten about the previous story. I originally opened it and read it as if I had not read it. But the plot became very familiar to me. When I turned to chapter v, I found that I had subscribed to it a lot, and I suddenly realized that I had read it. I didn't remember how bad Xu Lai was, and I also forgot that Lin Luan, the guy who occupied the magpie's nest, was actually very annoying. However, after finishing the last few chapters, I still felt relieved. Chen Zai, who died of depression in his previous life, could finally enjoy the life he should have enjoyed. He chose to accept his family and forgive them, probably because he still expected the warmth from his family in his heart. Maybe there are still resentments and tangled resentments in my heart, but with more and more interactions with my family and the gentle soothing of time, these resentments and resentments will eventually be eliminated and defeated. I think this should be the ending that Da Da hopes for! Maybe some of the details in the article are not delicate and rounded enough, but it is undeniable that I like this story, it is truly sad and warm.

I thought it was a sweet article, but I didn't know how many tears I shed.

I accidentally watched it for the second time. The early stage of the work was very good, but the later stage really fell apart. It just feels like the protagonist's personality suddenly starts to change and becomes a bit annoying. If you want to emphasize the pursuit of fairness, I think it still needs to be paved. Too straight. Probably starting from those few trainees, it was a bit awkward. The protagonist makes demands too confidently, stands on the opposite side of the family at the end, etc. It is too straightforward and too natural. It would be very dramatic if it was well prepared and exaggerated, but the problem is that there is no such thing. This wipes away the distinctive side of the entire character in the early stage. He should be a very strong and thoughtful person. But later on, I became dependent and brainless. I became less like a person who struggled in reality but still maintained an innocent heart. Instead, I became more like a person who stayed in the garden and read some so-called noble books, and was completely idealistic and inhumane. The plot is too simple, which makes the protagonist look stupid, and the description of human nature is too idealistic. The protagonist shouldn't have become so stupid in the later period. Many things feel unexplained, such as why he rejected Director Jiang's movies so many times, and the variety show was simply unnecessary. It could have been deleted directly, but it would only amplify the flaw. Let's refine it a bit more. The front and back divisions are too big.

The article was well written, but there was one hole left unfilled. Xu Lai had left a surprise for Lin Ye and the others, but he never mentioned what the surprise was at the end.

Don't Lin Zhan and his uncle explain it to each other?

Madam, it's because she wants to write a hundred chapters. Emmmm, I really loved it in the early stage, but it's very rushed later on.

After brushing, go and do it more gently. (?,,???,,`)

The later stage was really messed up... Especially the reporting part. It was so chaotic that it made me angry.

Damn, you should revise your article. The early stage is really great, but the later stage is not good and it feels rushed.