It has a lot of ideas, but I still have a few small comments. There are many long paragraphs in the article, which seems a bit dragging. Furthermore, some of the dialogues are very childish and not vivid enough. Secondly, the connecting words are a bit strange. Finally, some of the content is a bit lengthy and boring. Okay, just some personal opinions. I may have been wrong about four of them. I hope you don't mind. Hehe, come on! ^U^
It has a lot of ideas, but I still have a few small comments. There are many long paragraphs in the article, which seems a bit dragging. Furthermore, some of the dialogues are very childish and not vivid enough. Secondly, the connecting words are a bit strange. Finally, some of the content is a bit lengthy and boring. Okay, just some personal opinions. I may have been wrong about four of them. I hope you don't mind. Hehe, come on! ^U^
In a smile? Wei Xiaoli?