Naruto Fan Fiction: The Butterfly Can't Cross the Sea

It would be better if you could write a little bit about how Naruto fell in love with Hinata... The people in this article "Naruto - Time flies (CP: Naruhina)" wrote very well...

Hmm... The content is good. A bit short. Um. It should be longer. Add something. For example, Hinata cried silently and refused. Then tortured Naruto. Hey... Who kept him from paying attention and kept looking at the little girl accompanying him, the shy little princess Hinata. Um. That. Come on, author!!

Hinata written by the author has the flavor of the original work

Teeth in Japanese is pronounced Ki Ba

But it's really well written

Well, I'm really not saying that about you, the author. The writing is indeed not good, and the portrayal of the characters is not very similar. This is purely a personal opinion, so don't be angry.

Too little plot Too general Don't make it look like writing poetry But I think the theme I found is good Keep up the good work Come on!!!

Very good, I really like the fanfic about Hinata. Come on!!!!

It seems that there are no comments yet, so I will write the first one. I remember that I wrote an article at that time and wrote many chapters, but still no one paid attention to it. I check the Internet every day to see if anyone can leave me a review. But I waited and waited and there was no comment. I was very depressed at that time. But then I finally got a comment, and I was really happy then. So I think if I write a review for Dada, it will make Dada happier, right? (I hope I'm not being sentimental) As for "Ning Hina", it has always been my favorite CP! I wonder if you have ever watched "Naruto - Time flies (CP: Naruhina)"? ——That Ming Hina article has always been my favorite article. In fact, I have always liked Naruto because of his strength, hard work, confidence, and bravery... And he also makes me feel bad. I've long wanted to write a story about Naruto as the main character, who travels through Naruto. But since I am in my third year of junior high school, I don't have much time. I will probably start writing after the high school entrance examination… (I am very lazy) Yeah, I talked a lot of nonsense above... I'm sorry... Let's get to the point... This article is indeed not very good, because the writing style and concept are not very good, and it seems a bit rushed. I hope you can revise the text a bit. Come on!! Author's reply: Well, thank you, sir~ Because I don't like Naruto, and I'm currently busy with the Net King fanfic, so I will definitely edit it when I have time!