[Overall Blurb]
In her previous life, Ning Chang'an took her own life: her entire family was executed because of her, their nine branches condemned along with them, and she could no longer bear to go on living in disgrace.
In this life, it is not she who is reborn.
[Detailed Blurb]
She asks for neither wealth nor glory, only true love in this life, and one partner for life. When she met him, she thought she had found someone to entrust her life to.
But she didn't know that he gave up an empire within his grasp for her, as well as his wives, concubines, and children.
[Reading Notes]
1. The story is set in a fictional world after the An Lushan Rebellion of the Tang Dynasty. Please don't nitpick the history.
2. The heroine is peerlessly beautiful, born with an enchanting allure.
Theme:
Aren't you allowed to see outsiders before you turn 18? Why do you still let the heroine travel with the master?
It's so tiring to watch, the relationship between the characters is so confusing, I can't understand it
A big call
Is it a tragedy? The heroine died and was reborn in the second part?
Like (｡ò∀ó｡)
Wow, the ending was unexpected! What should I say about this book? At first, what attracted me to the story was that the heroine was a native and the heroine was reborn. Then, the male protagonist was not particularly well portrayed. Although I could accept the fact that he has a wife and children, I just felt that the male protagonist had a weird personality. Before he married the heroine, it was fine. Especially after the marriage, the plot between him and the heroine was completely fast-forwarded. . . On the contrary, I really enjoyed watching the second male lead. Personally, I think the second male lead is more like the male lead than the male lead. . . The author's writing style is pretty good, but the pacing needs to be a little more careful~~ Come on!
Big Candy, I have always been there, but I don't like the writing style of this book very much. In fact, your writing is very good, but the plot does not correspond to the market. If your book is published in 10 years, it should be popular, but now, the competition is already fierce. You always can't write the protagonist at the beginning of the article, which makes people feel very boring. Fanchen is written from the perspective of the heroine, but the heroine only came out after more than 50,000 words. It feels like a bowl of noodles that are originally very fragrant. You Asking readers to wait for the noodles to cool down or become soft before eating them has simply lost the original deliciousness. Although this novel is also written from the perspective of the heroine, you spend too much time on the growth of the heroine. The hero also takes a long time to appear, and the setting of the hero himself is not perfect. He has a wife and children. This is a fatal point in a pornographic novel, so if you don't change this habit, it feels like many people will not be able to read it.
Another point is that you are not sure about your tone, because if you write about Machiavellianism, the female protagonist should not farm. In fact, the biggest failure point of this book is the shaping of the male protagonist. Many people nowadays hope that the male protagonist will be clean physically and mentally, not like a stallion. Although we also know that there are very few such people in reality, but it is because there are very few such people in reality that we read novels.
This is just my little opinion.
I have been fond of reading candies since I was the only one in the world, so I very much hope that your book can be read by most people.
In fact, I personally feel that your biggest complaint is that the pace at the beginning is too slow. Many times what you write is not very interesting, so I hope you can read the beginning of Huo Wen and summarize it. I hope Candy can keep writing, and I will support you.
Come on, come on, you are great
Plus, no matter what choice you make in the future, I will always support you
I feel like the heroine's character is not very likable. . I like bolder heroines, but she is too indecisive.
Aren't you allowed to see outsiders before you turn 18? Why do you still let the heroine travel with the master?
It's so tiring to watch, the relationship between the characters is so confusing, I can't understand it
A big call
Is it a tragedy? The heroine died and was reborn in the second part?
Like (｡ò∀ó｡)
Wow, the ending was unexpected! What should I say about this book? At first, what attracted me to the story was that the heroine was a native and the heroine was reborn. Then, the male protagonist was not particularly well portrayed. Although I could accept the fact that he has a wife and children, I just felt that the male protagonist had a weird personality. Before he married the heroine, it was fine. Especially after the marriage, the plot between him and the heroine was completely fast-forwarded. . . On the contrary, I really enjoyed watching the second male lead. Personally, I think the second male lead is more like the male lead than the male lead. . . The author's writing style is pretty good, but the pacing needs to be a little more careful~~ Come on!
Big Candy, I have always been there, but I don't like the writing style of this book very much. In fact, your writing is very good, but the plot does not correspond to the market. If your book is published in 10 years, it should be popular, but now, the competition is already fierce. You always can't write the protagonist at the beginning of the article, which makes people feel very boring. Fanchen is written from the perspective of the heroine, but the heroine only came out after more than 50,000 words. It feels like a bowl of noodles that are originally very fragrant. You Asking readers to wait for the noodles to cool down or become soft before eating them has simply lost the original deliciousness. Although this novel is also written from the perspective of the heroine, you spend too much time on the growth of the heroine. The hero also takes a long time to appear, and the setting of the hero himself is not perfect. He has a wife and children. This is a fatal point in a pornographic novel, so if you don't change this habit, it feels like many people will not be able to read it. Another point is that you are not sure about your tone, because if you write about Machiavellianism, the female protagonist should not farm. In fact, the biggest failure point of this book is the shaping of the male protagonist. Many people nowadays hope that the male protagonist will be clean physically and mentally, not like a stallion. Although we also know that there are very few such people in reality, but it is because there are very few such people in reality that we read novels. This is just my little opinion. I have been fond of reading candies since I was the only one in the world, so I very much hope that your book can be read by most people. In fact, I personally feel that your biggest complaint is that the pace at the beginning is too slow. Many times what you write is not very interesting, so I hope you can read the beginning of Huo Wen and summarize it. I hope Candy can keep writing, and I will support you.
Come on, come on, you are great
Plus, no matter what choice you make in the future, I will always support you
I feel like the heroine's character is not very likable. . I like bolder heroines, but she is too indecisive.